[PATCH 1/9] tzset.3: Cleanup grammar/clarity

[Michael Witten <mfwitten-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>]

* A comma is added at the end of an introductory phrase.

* The preposition `to' is used to complete the idea of
  setting a variable's value.

* The conjunction `or' is introduced to separate alternative
  values for `daylight'.

Signed-off-by: Michael Witten <mfwitten-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>
---
 man3/tzset.3 |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man3/tzset.3 b/man3/tzset.3
index 10c6d3a..ad496f7 100644
--- a/man3/tzset.3
+++ b/man3/tzset.3
@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@ function initializes the \fItzname\fP variable from the
 environment variable.
 This function is automatically called by the
 other time conversion functions that depend on the timezone.
-In a System-V-like environment it will also set the variables \fItimezone\fP
-(seconds West of GMT) and \fIdaylight\fP (0 if this timezone does not
-have any daylight saving time rules, non-zero if there is a time during
+In a System-V-like environment, it will also set the variables \fItimezone\fP
+(to seconds West of GMT) and \fIdaylight\fP (to 0 if this timezone does not
+have any daylight saving time rules, or to non-zero if there is a time during
 the year when daylight saving time applies).
 .PP
 If the
-- 
1.6.5.2.180.gc5b3e

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