[PATCH 1/2] proc.5: tfix

[PATCH 1/2] proc.5: tfix

[Jakub Wilk]

Signed-off-by: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>
---
 man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
index c84319b..2f8b51c 100644
--- a/man5/proc.5
+++ b/man5/proc.5
@@ -133,10 +133,10 @@ whether other users are running any program at all, and so on).
 Specifies the ID of a group whose members are authorized to
 learn process information otherwise prohibited by
 .BR hidepid
-(ie/e/, users in this group behave as though
+(i.e., users in this group behave as though
 .I /proc
 was mounted with
-.IR hidepid=0 .
+.IR hidepid=0 ).
 This group should be used instead of approaches such as putting
 nonroot users into the
 .BR sudoers (5)
-- 
2.8.1

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[PATCH 2/2] clone.2, confstr.3, hpsa.4, tcp.7: tfix

[Jakub Wilk]

Signed-off-by: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>
---
 man2/clone.2   | 2 +-
 man3/confstr.3 | 4 ++--
 man4/hpsa.4    | 2 +-
 man7/tcp.7     | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man2/clone.2 b/man2/clone.2
index 78f6db3..0318258 100644
--- a/man2/clone.2
+++ b/man2/clone.2
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ If this flag is not set, then (as with
 the new process has its own I/O context.
 
 .\" The following based on text from Jens Axboe
-The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e,
+The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e.,
 what the I/O scheduler uses to model scheduling of a process's I/O).
 If processes share the same I/O context,
 they are treated as one by the I/O scheduler.
diff --git a/man3/confstr.3 b/man3/confstr.3
index 6263daf..5bb75f1 100644
--- a/man3/confstr.3
+++ b/man3/confstr.3
@@ -57,11 +57,11 @@ The following variables are supported:
 .TP
 .BR _CS_GNU_LIBC_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
 A string which identifies the GNU C library version on this system
-(e.g, "glibc 2.3.4").
+(e.g., "glibc 2.3.4").
 .TP
 .BR _CS_GNU_LIBPTHREAD_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
 A string which identifies the POSIX implementation supplied by this
-C library (e.g, "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
+C library (e.g., "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
 .TP
 .B _CS_PATH
 A value for the
diff --git a/man4/hpsa.4 b/man4/hpsa.4
index 6ca1537..5405b0d 100644
--- a/man4/hpsa.4
+++ b/man4/hpsa.4
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ respectively.
 .I /sys/class/scsi_host/host*/rescan
 This is a write-only attribute.
 Writing to this attribute will cause the driver to scan for
-new, changed, or removed devices (e.g,. hot-plugged tape drives,
+new, changed, or removed devices (e.g., hot-plugged tape drives,
 or newly configured or deleted logical drives, etc.)
 and notify the SCSI midlayer of any changes detected.
 Normally a rescan is triggered automatically
diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
index 56660b0..89f2b22 100644
--- a/man7/tcp.7
+++ b/man7/tcp.7
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ supporting just values 0 and 1 above.
 .TP
 .IR tcp_frto_response " (integer; default: 0; since Linux 2.6.22)"
 When F-RTO has detected that a TCP retransmission timeout was spurious
-(i.e, the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
+(i.e., the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
 longer retransmission timeout),
 TCP has several options concerning what to do next.
 Possible values are:
-- 
2.8.1

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Re: [PATCH 2/2] clone.2, confstr.3, hpsa.4, tcp.7: tfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

On 06/07/2016 11:19 AM, Jakub Wilk wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>

Thanks, Jakub. Applied.

Cheers,

Michael

> ---
>  man2/clone.2   | 2 +-
>  man3/confstr.3 | 4 ++--
>  man4/hpsa.4    | 2 +-
>  man7/tcp.7     | 2 +-
>  4 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man2/clone.2 b/man2/clone.2
> index 78f6db3..0318258 100644
> --- a/man2/clone.2
> +++ b/man2/clone.2
> @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ If this flag is not set, then (as with
>  the new process has its own I/O context.
>  
>  .\" The following based on text from Jens Axboe
> -The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e,
> +The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e.,
>  what the I/O scheduler uses to model scheduling of a process's I/O).
>  If processes share the same I/O context,
>  they are treated as one by the I/O scheduler.
> diff --git a/man3/confstr.3 b/man3/confstr.3
> index 6263daf..5bb75f1 100644
> --- a/man3/confstr.3
> +++ b/man3/confstr.3
> @@ -57,11 +57,11 @@ The following variables are supported:
>  .TP
>  .BR _CS_GNU_LIBC_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
>  A string which identifies the GNU C library version on this system
> -(e.g, "glibc 2.3.4").
> +(e.g., "glibc 2.3.4").
>  .TP
>  .BR _CS_GNU_LIBPTHREAD_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
>  A string which identifies the POSIX implementation supplied by this
> -C library (e.g, "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
> +C library (e.g., "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
>  .TP
>  .B _CS_PATH
>  A value for the
> diff --git a/man4/hpsa.4 b/man4/hpsa.4
> index 6ca1537..5405b0d 100644
> --- a/man4/hpsa.4
> +++ b/man4/hpsa.4
> @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ respectively.
>  .I /sys/class/scsi_host/host*/rescan
>  This is a write-only attribute.
>  Writing to this attribute will cause the driver to scan for
> -new, changed, or removed devices (e.g,. hot-plugged tape drives,
> +new, changed, or removed devices (e.g., hot-plugged tape drives,
>  or newly configured or deleted logical drives, etc.)
>  and notify the SCSI midlayer of any changes detected.
>  Normally a rescan is triggered automatically
> diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
> index 56660b0..89f2b22 100644
> --- a/man7/tcp.7
> +++ b/man7/tcp.7
> @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ supporting just values 0 and 1 above.
>  .TP
>  .IR tcp_frto_response " (integer; default: 0; since Linux 2.6.22)"
>  When F-RTO has detected that a TCP retransmission timeout was spurious
> -(i.e, the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
> +(i.e., the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
>  longer retransmission timeout),
>  TCP has several options concerning what to do next.
>  Possible values are:
> 


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Re: [PATCH 1/2] proc.5: tfix

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

On 06/07/2016 11:19 AM, Jakub Wilk wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>

Applied. Thanks, Jakub.

Cheers,

Michael


> ---
>  man5/proc.5 | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man5/proc.5 b/man5/proc.5
> index c84319b..2f8b51c 100644
> --- a/man5/proc.5
> +++ b/man5/proc.5
> @@ -133,10 +133,10 @@ whether other users are running any program at all, and so on).
>  Specifies the ID of a group whose members are authorized to
>  learn process information otherwise prohibited by
>  .BR hidepid
> -(ie/e/, users in this group behave as though
> +(i.e., users in this group behave as though
>  .I /proc
>  was mounted with
> -.IR hidepid=0 .
> +.IR hidepid=0 ).
>  This group should be used instead of approaches such as putting
>  nonroot users into the
>  .BR sudoers (5)
> 


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