Re: Issue in man page session-keyring.7

[Alejandro Colomar <alx.manpages@gmail.com>]

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Hi Branden, Helge:

On 1/22/23 21:08, G. Branden Robinson wrote:
> Hi Helge,
> 
> At 2023-01-22T20:31:30+0100, Helge Kreutzmann wrote:
>> Without further ado, the following was found:
>>
>> Issue:    What does "under others" mean? Is this a special hook? Or does this mean "amongst other actions done by this command"?
>>
>> "If a process doesn't have a session keyring when it is accessed, then, under"
>> "certain circumstances, the B<user-session-keyring>(7)  will be attached as"
>> "the session keyring and under others a new session keyring will be created."
>> "(See B<user-session-keyring>(7)  for further details.)"
> 
> It seems idiomatic to me.
> 
> Under certain circumstances, I wake up in the morning.
> Under others [other circumstances], I awaken after noon.

I believe a semicolon would be a better way to connect both sentences.  "and", 
considering the amount of commans in the context, doesn't help very much parsing 
the sentence.

What do you think?

Cheers,

Alex

P.S.: The colon in the salutation is the standard way in Spanish :)

> 
> Regards,
> Branden

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