From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.2 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00, HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_NONE,SPF_PASS, USER_AGENT_SANE_2 autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=3.4.0 Received: from mail.kernel.org (mail.kernel.org [198.145.29.99]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D1467C433E0 for ; Mon, 21 Dec 2020 19:46:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by mail.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 809782251E for ; Mon, 21 Dec 2020 19:46:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1725783AbgLUTqL (ORCPT ); Mon, 21 Dec 2020 14:46:11 -0500 Received: from 17.mo5.mail-out.ovh.net ([46.105.56.132]:50037 "EHLO 17.mo5.mail-out.ovh.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1725791AbgLUTqL (ORCPT ); Mon, 21 Dec 2020 14:46:11 -0500 Received: from player693.ha.ovh.net (unknown [10.108.35.158]) by mo5.mail-out.ovh.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1EF982A4ECB for ; Mon, 21 Dec 2020 20:45:28 +0100 (CET) Received: from sk2.org (82-65-25-201.subs.proxad.net [82.65.25.201]) (Authenticated sender: steve@sk2.org) by player693.ha.ovh.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 76A7D195CF0E0; Mon, 21 Dec 2020 19:45:19 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: garm.ovh; auth=pass (GARM-103G005223a1dda-d929-49f3-b5d3-60eaaa581547, A98814B0FADA3C5872731A5F91035151D8D30146) smtp.auth=steve@sk2.org X-OVh-ClientIp: 82.65.25.201 Date: Mon, 21 Dec 2020 20:45:11 +0100 From: Stephen Kitt To: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" Cc: linux-man@vger.kernel.org, Michael Kerrisk , Christian Brauner , Giuseppe Scrivano , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] close_range.2: new page documenting close_range(2) Message-ID: <20201221204511.4cd0d048@heffalump.sk2.org> In-Reply-To: References: <20201218165815.6963-1-steve@sk2.org> <20201221202425.168fdaaf@heffalump.sk2.org> X-Mailer: Claws Mail 3.17.3 (GTK+ 2.24.32; x86_64-pc-linux-gnu) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; boundary="Sig_/NWOsOn5iMR5MoTHrN04y/nb"; protocol="application/pgp-signature" X-Ovh-Tracer-Id: 18110944426671492566 X-VR-SPAMSTATE: OK X-VR-SPAMSCORE: -100 X-VR-SPAMCAUSE: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgedujedrvddtvddgudefvdcutefuodetggdotefrodftvfcurfhrohhfihhlvgemucfqggfjpdevjffgvefmvefgnecuuegrihhlohhuthemucehtddtnecusecvtfgvtghiphhivghnthhsucdlqddutddtmdenucfjughrpeffhffvuffkjghfofggtgesghdtreerredtjeenucfhrhhomhepufhtvghphhgvnhcumfhithhtuceoshhtvghvvgesshhkvddrohhrgheqnecuggftrfgrthhtvghrnhepveelvdeufedvieevffdtueegkeevteehffdtffetleehjeekjeejudffieduteeknecukfhppedtrddtrddtrddtpdekvddrieehrddvhedrvddtudenucevlhhushhtvghrufhiiigvpedtnecurfgrrhgrmhepmhhouggvpehsmhhtphdqohhuthdphhgvlhhopehplhgrhigvrheileefrdhhrgdrohhvhhdrnhgvthdpihhnvghtpedtrddtrddtrddtpdhmrghilhhfrhhomhepshhtvghvvgesshhkvddrohhrghdprhgtphhtthhopehlihhnuhigqdhmrghnsehvghgvrhdrkhgvrhhnvghlrdhorhhg Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-man@vger.kernel.org --Sig_/NWOsOn5iMR5MoTHrN04y/nb Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Alex, On Mon, 21 Dec 2020 20:33:06 +0100, "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" wrote: > On 12/21/20 8:24 PM, Stephen Kitt wrote: > > On Sat, 19 Dec 2020 15:00:00 +0100, "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" > > wrote: =20 > >> On 12/18/20 5:58 PM, Stephen Kitt wrote: =20 > > [...] =20 > >>> +This program executes the command given on its command-line after > >>> +opening the files listed after the command, > >>> +and then using =20 > >> > >> s/using/uses/ =20 > > > > It=E2=80=99s the same form as =E2=80=9Copening=E2=80=9D: =E2=80=9Cafter= opening ... and then using=E2=80=9D. The > > overall sequence is =E2=80=9Copen=E2=80=9D, =E2=80=9Cclose_range=E2=80= =9D, =E2=80=9Cexecve=E2=80=9D. >=20 > Ahhh. Then I think the comma is misleading. > What about the following?: >=20 >=20 > On 12/18/20 5:58 PM, Stephen Kitt wrote: > > +.PP > > +This program executes the command given on its command-line after > > +opening the files listed after the command, > > +and then using > > +.B close_range > > +to close them: =20 >=20 > This program executes the command given on its command line, > after opening the files listed after the command > and then using *close_range()* to close them: Yes, that works better. I=E2=80=99ll follow up with a v5 with just that change. 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