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[68.12.97.90]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id f18-20020a056871071200b0014f81d27ce3sm1855095oap.55.2023.01.07.08.45.44 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Sat, 07 Jan 2023 08:45:44 -0800 (PST) Date: Sat, 7 Jan 2023 10:45:42 -0600 From: "G. Branden Robinson" To: Alejandro Colomar Cc: linux-man@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v4 08/10] intro.3: wfix Message-ID: <20230107164542.gnrk6t73vfz7fqps@illithid> References: <20230107095518.3ix6hfbgig43tmkw@illithid> <814d00de-7ed7-0a7f-3b96-714c35591019@gmail.com> <7516714b-7f8e-b6b1-b44a-f114b78ac973@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="hjl3dmg2it2ty6lg" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <7516714b-7f8e-b6b1-b44a-f114b78ac973@gmail.com> Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-man@vger.kernel.org --hjl3dmg2it2ty6lg Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi ALex, At 2023-01-07T13:57:36+0100, Alejandro Colomar wrote: > > On 1/7/23 10:55, G. Branden Robinson wrote: > > > * Tighten cross reference.=A0 It wastes words to tell people to look > > > =A0=A0 elsewhere "for further information".=A0 Why else would they lo= ok there? > > > * Use passive voice less. > > > * Relocate sentence for more coherent discussion. > > > * Say "application _programming_ interface". >=20 > Hmm, after reconsideration, I've dropped the patch. I'm not sure about i= t. What is causing you concern? 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