From: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
To: Jeremy Kerr <jk@codeconstruct.com.au>
Cc: Michael Kerrisk <mtk.manpages@gmail.com>,
linux-man@vger.kernel.org,
Dwaipayan Ray <dwaipayanray1@gmail.com>,
Joe Perches <joe@perches.com>, Andy Whitcroft <apw@canonical.com>,
Lukas Bulwahn <lukas.bulwahn@gmail.com>,
"linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org" <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support
Date: Mon, 18 Oct 2021 08:59:07 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <3946e062-8e97-78a2-b1db-2a7d92c4730b@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <e6a15bfbb2337b78c9e1305956e71cebd7b4328f.camel@codeconstruct.com.au>
[CC += checkpatch.pl maintainers (see reason below)]
Hi Jeremy,
On 10/18/21 7:05 AM, Jeremy Kerr wrote:
> Hi Alex,
>
>> Thanks for the manual page!
>
> And thanks for the review! In general, I've updated to suit your
> comments, just a couple of queries inline.
>
>>> +.SH SYNOPSIS
>>> +.nf
>>> +.B #include <sys/socket.h>
>>> +.B #include <linux/mctp.h>
>>> +.PP
>>> +.B mctp_socket = socket(AF_MCTP, SOCK_DGRAM, 0);
>>
>> mctp_socket is a variable name. See socket.7 for an example.
>> It should be in italics.
>
> This was based on udp.7; want me to send a patch for that too?
Sure. Thanks!
>
>>> +Packets between a local and remote endpoint are identified by the
>>> source
>>> +and destination EIDs, plus a three-bit tag value.
>>> +.PP
>>> +Addressing data is passed in socket system calls through
>>> +.B struct sockaddr\_mctp
>>
>> That escape is unnecessary. Did you see it in another page perhaps?
>
> I thought I'd seen some odd line-breaks at the underscore, but can't
> replicate that now. Will remove.
>
>>> +typedef uint8_t mctp_eid_t;
>>> +
>>> +struct mctp_addr {
>>> + mctp_eid_t s_addr;
>>> +};
>>> +
>>> +struct sockaddr_mctp {
>>> + unsigned short int smctp_family; /* = AF_MCTP */
>>
>> We only use 'int' in 'unsigned int', as the kernel does (or attempts
>> to do). checkpatch.pl warns about 'unsigned short int', IIRC.
>
> No, there are no warnings from checkpatch there; that's just copied from
> the current kernel header.
Huh! That's weird; 'unsigned long int' does, so I expected the same
with 'short'. Maybe a bug in checkpatch?
WARNING:UNNECESSARY_INT: Prefer 'unsigned long' over 'unsigned long int'
as the int is unnecessary
#42: FILE: /home/user/src/alx/test/unsigned_short_int.c:42:
+ unsigned long int a;
total: 0 errors, 1 warnings, 0 checks, 65 lines checked
>
> However, I have just sent a separate patch to change that to
> __kernel_sa_family_t. Should I use that here (keeping this an exact
> match of the kernel header), or stick to the more familiar unsigned
> short?
I prefer 'unsigned short' for consistency with 'unsigned long'.
>
> Cheers,
>
>
> Jeremy
>
Cheers,
Alex
--
Alejandro Colomar
Linux man-pages comaintainer; https://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/
http://www.alejandro-colomar.es/
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-10-18 6:59 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-10-14 7:05 [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Jeremy Kerr
2021-10-17 18:49 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18 5:05 ` Jeremy Kerr
2021-10-18 5:57 ` G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18 7:16 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18 7:53 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-11-22 1:09 ` Suppressing hyphenation (was: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support) G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18 6:59 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages) [this message]
2021-10-18 7:46 ` [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
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