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From: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
To: Jeremy Kerr <jk@codeconstruct.com.au>
Cc: Michael Kerrisk <mtk.manpages@gmail.com>,
	linux-man@vger.kernel.org,
	Dwaipayan Ray <dwaipayanray1@gmail.com>,
	Joe Perches <joe@perches.com>, Andy Whitcroft <apw@canonical.com>,
	Lukas Bulwahn <lukas.bulwahn@gmail.com>,
	"linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org" <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support
Date: Mon, 18 Oct 2021 08:59:07 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <3946e062-8e97-78a2-b1db-2a7d92c4730b@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <e6a15bfbb2337b78c9e1305956e71cebd7b4328f.camel@codeconstruct.com.au>

[CC += checkpatch.pl maintainers (see reason below)]


Hi Jeremy,

On 10/18/21 7:05 AM, Jeremy Kerr wrote:
> Hi Alex,
> 
>> Thanks for the manual page!
> 
> And thanks for the review! In general, I've updated to suit your
> comments, just a couple of queries inline.
> 
>>> +.SH SYNOPSIS
>>> +.nf
>>> +.B #include <sys/socket.h>
>>> +.B #include <linux/mctp.h>
>>> +.PP
>>> +.B mctp_socket = socket(AF_MCTP, SOCK_DGRAM, 0);
>>
>> mctp_socket is a variable name.  See socket.7 for an example.
>> It should be in italics.
> 
> This was based on udp.7; want me to send a patch for that too?

Sure. Thanks!

> 
>>> +Packets between a local and remote endpoint are identified by the
>>> source
>>> +and destination EIDs, plus a three-bit tag value.
>>> +.PP
>>> +Addressing data is passed in socket system calls through
>>> +.B struct sockaddr\_mctp
>>
>> That escape is unnecessary.  Did you see it in another page perhaps?
> 
> I thought I'd seen some odd line-breaks at the underscore, but can't
> replicate that now. Will remove.
> 
>>> +typedef uint8_t        mctp_eid_t;
>>> +
>>> +struct mctp_addr {
>>> +    mctp_eid_t         s_addr;
>>> +};
>>> +
>>> +struct sockaddr_mctp {
>>> +    unsigned short int smctp_family;  /* = AF_MCTP */
>>
>> We only use 'int' in 'unsigned int', as the kernel does (or attempts
>> to do).  checkpatch.pl warns about 'unsigned short int', IIRC.
> 
> No, there are no warnings from checkpatch there; that's just copied from
> the current kernel header.

Huh!  That's weird; 'unsigned long int' does, so I expected the same 
with 'short'.  Maybe a bug in checkpatch?


WARNING:UNNECESSARY_INT: Prefer 'unsigned long' over 'unsigned long int' 
as the int is unnecessary
#42: FILE: /home/user/src/alx/test/unsigned_short_int.c:42:
+	unsigned long int a;

total: 0 errors, 1 warnings, 0 checks, 65 lines checked


> 
> However, I have just sent a separate patch to change that to
> __kernel_sa_family_t. Should I use that here (keeping this an exact
> match of the kernel header), or stick to the more familiar unsigned
> short?


I prefer 'unsigned short' for consistency with 'unsigned long'.

> 
> Cheers,
> 
> 
> Jeremy
> 

Cheers,

Alex


-- 
Alejandro Colomar
Linux man-pages comaintainer; https://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/
http://www.alejandro-colomar.es/

  parent reply	other threads:[~2021-10-18  6:59 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-10-14  7:05 [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Jeremy Kerr
2021-10-17 18:49 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18  5:05   ` Jeremy Kerr
2021-10-18  5:57     ` G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18  7:16       ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18  7:53         ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-11-22  1:09           ` Suppressing hyphenation (was: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support) G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18  6:59     ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages) [this message]
2021-10-18  7:46   ` [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)

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