Missing word in aio.7

Missing word in aio.7

[Denis Barbier]

Hello,

Around line 120 of man7/aio.7:
  This field specifies a value that is subtracted
  from the calling thread's real-time priority in order to
  determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
  .BR pthread_setschedparam (3)).

Here is a patch
-determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
+determine the priority for execution of this I/O request (see
but you may want to change punctuation.

Denis
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[patch] aio.7: Some minor typos (Was: Missing word in aio.7)

[David Prévot]

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Hi,

Please find inline a patch including Denis' proposal and two others
spotted during translation, against current aio(7) manual page.


diff --git a/man7/aio.7 b/man7/aio.7
index e1d6d2b..5a0f734 100644
- --- a/man7/aio.7
+++ b/man7/aio.7
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ This is the size of the buffer pointed to by
 .I aio_reqprio
 This field specifies a value that is subtracted
 from the calling thread's real-time priority in order to
- -determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
+determine the priority for execution of this I/O request (see
 .BR pthread_setschedparam (3)).
 The specified value must be between 0 and the value returned by
 .IR sysconf(_SC_AIO_PRIO_DELTA_MAX) .
- -This field is ignored file synchronization operations.
+This field is ignored during file synchronization operations.
 .TP
 .I aio_sigevent
 This field is a structure that specifies how the caller is
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ main(int argc, char *argv[])
 .BR io_setup (2),
 .BR io_cancel (2),
 .BR io_destroy (2),
- -.BR io_getevents (2)),
+.BR io_getevents (2),
 .BR aio_cancel (3),
 .BR aio_error (3),
 .BR aio_init (3),


Regards

David
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Re: Missing word in aio.7

[Michael Kerrisk]

Hello Denis,

On Wed, Oct 6, 2010 at 11:39 PM, Denis Barbier <bouzim-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org> wrote:
> Hello,
>
> Around line 120 of man7/aio.7:
>  This field specifies a value that is subtracted
>  from the calling thread's real-time priority in order to
>  determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
>  .BR pthread_setschedparam (3)).
>
> Here is a patch
> -determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
> +determine the priority for execution of this I/O request (see
> but you may want to change punctuation.

By chance, I had already caught and fixed this.

Cheers,

Michael



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Re: [patch] aio.7: Some minor typos (Was: Missing word in aio.7)

[Michael Kerrisk]

Hello David,

On Thu, Oct 7, 2010 at 5:43 PM, David Prévot <davidp-whniv8GeeGkdnm+yROfE0A@public.gmane.org> wrote:
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>
> Hi,
>
> Please find inline a patch including Denis' proposal and two others
> spotted during translation, against current aio(7) manual page.
>
>
> diff --git a/man7/aio.7 b/man7/aio.7
> index e1d6d2b..5a0f734 100644
> - --- a/man7/aio.7
> +++ b/man7/aio.7
> @@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ This is the size of the buffer pointed to by
>  .I aio_reqprio
>  This field specifies a value that is subtracted
>  from the calling thread's real-time priority in order to
> - -determine the priority for execution of this I/O request.
> +determine the priority for execution of this I/O request (see
>  .BR pthread_setschedparam (3)).
>  The specified value must be between 0 and the value returned by
>  .IR sysconf(_SC_AIO_PRIO_DELTA_MAX) .
> - -This field is ignored file synchronization operations.
> +This field is ignored during file synchronization operations.
>  .TP
>  .I aio_sigevent
>  This field is a structure that specifies how the caller is
> @@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ main(int argc, char *argv[])
>  .BR io_setup (2),
>  .BR io_cancel (2),
>  .BR io_destroy (2),
> - -.BR io_getevents (2)),
> +.BR io_getevents (2),
>  .BR aio_cancel (3),
>  .BR aio_error (3),
>  .BR aio_init (3),

I had already myself found and fixed the first two problems, but the
third one I had missed. Thanks for the patch. Applied for 3.29.

Cheers,

Michael


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