From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Jon Grant Subject: wmempcpy Date: Tue, 27 Sep 2011 21:31:14 +0100 Message-ID: <4E823292.1070806@jguk.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Return-path: Sender: linux-man-owner-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org To: mtk.manpages-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org Cc: linux-man-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org List-Id: linux-man@vger.kernel.org Hello Just wondering if this could be re-phrased to avoid starting sentence with "but": http://man7.org/linux/man-pages/online/pages/man3/wmempcpy.3.html "But instead.." How about simply removing "But" and adding a comma after "dest', so it becomes: Instead of returning the value of dest, it returns a pointer to the byte following the last written byte." -- I'd be tempted to also say "after" rather than "following", to keep the words shorter! Best regards, Jon -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-man" in the body of a message to majordomo-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html