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From: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
To: mtk.manpages@gmail.com
Cc: linux-man@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] circleq.3, list.3, slist.3, stailq.3, tailq.3: Improve readability, especially in SYNOPSIS
Date: Tue, 5 Jan 2021 23:53:44 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <4ec7cc66-fe37-30d7-cc03-a93438fad0cd@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20210105223955.63678-1-alx.manpages@gmail.com>


A minor correction below:

On 1/5/21 11:39 PM, Alejandro Colomar wrote:
> - Group macros by kinds.
> - Align so that it's easiest to distinguish differences
>   between related macros.
>   (Align all continuations for consistency on PDF.)
> - Fix minor typos.
> - Remove redundant text:
>     'The macro xxx() ...':
>         The first paragraph already says that these are macros.
>     'circular|tail|... queue':
>         Don't need to repeat every time.
>         Generic text makes it easier to spot the differences.
> - Fit lines into 78 columns.
> - Reorder descriptions to match SYNOPSIS,
>   and add subsections to DESCRIPTION.
> - srcfix: fix a few smantic newlines.
> 
> I noticed a bug which should be fixed next:
> CIRCLEQ_LOOP_*() return a 'struct TYPE *'.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Alejandro Colomar <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
> ---
>  man3/circleq.3 | 199 ++++++++++++++++++----------------------
>  man3/list.3    | 159 +++++++++++++++-----------------
>  man3/slist.3   | 159 +++++++++++++++-----------------
>  man3/stailq.3  | 184 +++++++++++++++++--------------------
>  man3/tailq.3   | 241 +++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------
>  5 files changed, 433 insertions(+), 509 deletions(-)
> 

[...]
> diff --git a/man3/slist.3 b/man3/slist.3
> index 6868a63c2..1b041773e 100644
> --- a/man3/slist.3
> +++ b/man3/slist.3
[...]
> @@ -200,30 +218,21 @@ turn to
[...]
> -.PP
> -The macro
> -.BR SLIST_NEXT ()
> -returns the next element in the list.
> +from the head of the list.
> +For optimum efficiency,
> +elements being removed from the head of the list
> +should explicitly use this macro instead of the generic
> +.IR SLIST_REMOVE ().

s/.IR/.BR/

[...]

-- 
Alejandro Colomar
Linux man-pages comaintainer; https://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/
http://www.alejandro-colomar.es/

  reply	other threads:[~2021-01-05 22:54 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2021-01-04 22:45 [PATCH] circleq.3, list.3, slist.3, stailq.3, tailq.3: Improve readability, especially in SYNOPSIS Alejandro Colomar
2021-01-04 23:05 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-01-05 13:25   ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2021-01-05 22:39     ` [PATCH v2] " Alejandro Colomar
2021-01-05 22:53       ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages) [this message]
2021-01-06 12:54         ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2021-01-06 11:12       ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2021-01-05 12:00 ` [PATCH] " Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2021-01-05 14:05   ` pdfman Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-01-06 11:09     ` pdfman Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)
2024-11-03  5:31       ` pdfman Alejandro Colomar

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