[PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[Yuri Kozlov]

Hello.
diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
index 9cd7206..1f4346d 100644
--- a/man7/tcp.7
+++ b/man7/tcp.7
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ Unprivileged processes are restricted to choosing one of th$
 (described above).
 Privileged processes
 .RB ( CAP_NET_ADMIN )
-processes can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
+can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
 (see the description of
 .IR tcp_available_congestion_control
 above).

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Yuri Kozlov

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[PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[Yuri Kozlov]

Hello.

 .IR "unsigned int"
 as an argument.
 When the value is greater than 0,
-it specifies the maximum amount of time in imilliseconds that transmitted
+it specifies the maximum amount of time in milliseconds that transmitted
 data may remain unacknowledged before TCP will forcibly close the
 corresponding connection and return
 .B ETIMEDOUT
@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ Increasing user timeouts allows a TCP connection to survive e$
 periods without end-to-end connectivity.
 Decreasing user timeouts
 allows applications to "fail fast", if so desired.
-Otherwise, failure may take upto 20 minutes with
+Otherwise, failure may take up to 20 minutes with
 the current system defaults in a normal WAN environment.


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Re: [PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Applied. Thanks.

A request for the future: please title patches as per this form

[[atch] <page-name>: description

For example:

[patch] shmop.2: Add "(void *)" cast to RETURN VALUE

For simple patches that fix typos, just make the description "tfix".

Thus, the subject line for this patch would best be:

[patch] tcp.7: tfix

Thanks,

Michael


On 02/01/2014 03:25 PM, Yuri Kozlov wrote:
> Hello.
> diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
> index 9cd7206..1f4346d 100644
> --- a/man7/tcp.7
> +++ b/man7/tcp.7
> @@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ Unprivileged processes are restricted to choosing one of th$
>  (described above).
>  Privileged processes
>  .RB ( CAP_NET_ADMIN )
> -processes can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
> +can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
>  (see the description of
>  .IR tcp_available_congestion_control
>  above).
> 


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Re: [PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

Applied.

Thanks,

Michael


On 02/01/2014 03:25 PM, Yuri Kozlov wrote:
> Hello.
> diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
> index 9cd7206..1f4346d 100644
> --- a/man7/tcp.7
> +++ b/man7/tcp.7
> @@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ Unprivileged processes are restricted to choosing one of th$
>  (described above).
>  Privileged processes
>  .RB ( CAP_NET_ADMIN )
> -processes can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
> +can choose from any of the available congestion-control algorithms
>  (see the description of
>  .IR tcp_available_congestion_control
>  above).
> 


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Re: [PATCH] small improvement for tcp.7

[Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)]

(Manually) applied.

Thanks,

Michael


On 02/01/2014 03:54 PM, Yuri Kozlov wrote:
> Hello.
> 
>  .IR "unsigned int"
>  as an argument.
>  When the value is greater than 0,
> -it specifies the maximum amount of time in imilliseconds that transmitted
> +it specifies the maximum amount of time in milliseconds that transmitted
>  data may remain unacknowledged before TCP will forcibly close the
>  corresponding connection and return
>  .B ETIMEDOUT
> @@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ Increasing user timeouts allows a TCP connection to survive e$
>  periods without end-to-end connectivity.
>  Decreasing user timeouts
>  allows applications to "fail fast", if so desired.
> -Otherwise, failure may take upto 20 minutes with
> +Otherwise, failure may take up to 20 minutes with
>  the current system defaults in a normal WAN environment.
> 
> 


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