From: "Michael Kerrisk (man-pages)" <mtk.manpages-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org>
To: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>
Cc: mtk.manpages-Re5JQEeQqe8AvxtiuMwx3w@public.gmane.org,
linux-man-u79uwXL29TY76Z2rM5mHXA@public.gmane.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] clone.2, confstr.3, hpsa.4, tcp.7: tfix
Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 11:24:28 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <973f8ce3-2c53-3bce-004c-e5d05193da66@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1465291164-5486-2-git-send-email-jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>
On 06/07/2016 11:19 AM, Jakub Wilk wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Jakub Wilk <jwilk-tXgOlIzOKNReoWH0uzbU5w@public.gmane.org>
Thanks, Jakub. Applied.
Cheers,
Michael
> ---
> man2/clone.2 | 2 +-
> man3/confstr.3 | 4 ++--
> man4/hpsa.4 | 2 +-
> man7/tcp.7 | 2 +-
> 4 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/man2/clone.2 b/man2/clone.2
> index 78f6db3..0318258 100644
> --- a/man2/clone.2
> +++ b/man2/clone.2
> @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ If this flag is not set, then (as with
> the new process has its own I/O context.
>
> .\" The following based on text from Jens Axboe
> -The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e,
> +The I/O context is the I/O scope of the disk scheduler (i.e.,
> what the I/O scheduler uses to model scheduling of a process's I/O).
> If processes share the same I/O context,
> they are treated as one by the I/O scheduler.
> diff --git a/man3/confstr.3 b/man3/confstr.3
> index 6263daf..5bb75f1 100644
> --- a/man3/confstr.3
> +++ b/man3/confstr.3
> @@ -57,11 +57,11 @@ The following variables are supported:
> .TP
> .BR _CS_GNU_LIBC_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
> A string which identifies the GNU C library version on this system
> -(e.g, "glibc 2.3.4").
> +(e.g., "glibc 2.3.4").
> .TP
> .BR _CS_GNU_LIBPTHREAD_VERSION " (GNU C library only; since glibc 2.3.2)"
> A string which identifies the POSIX implementation supplied by this
> -C library (e.g, "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
> +C library (e.g., "NPTL 2.3.4" or "linuxthreads-0.10").
> .TP
> .B _CS_PATH
> A value for the
> diff --git a/man4/hpsa.4 b/man4/hpsa.4
> index 6ca1537..5405b0d 100644
> --- a/man4/hpsa.4
> +++ b/man4/hpsa.4
> @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ respectively.
> .I /sys/class/scsi_host/host*/rescan
> This is a write-only attribute.
> Writing to this attribute will cause the driver to scan for
> -new, changed, or removed devices (e.g,. hot-plugged tape drives,
> +new, changed, or removed devices (e.g., hot-plugged tape drives,
> or newly configured or deleted logical drives, etc.)
> and notify the SCSI midlayer of any changes detected.
> Normally a rescan is triggered automatically
> diff --git a/man7/tcp.7 b/man7/tcp.7
> index 56660b0..89f2b22 100644
> --- a/man7/tcp.7
> +++ b/man7/tcp.7
> @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ supporting just values 0 and 1 above.
> .TP
> .IR tcp_frto_response " (integer; default: 0; since Linux 2.6.22)"
> When F-RTO has detected that a TCP retransmission timeout was spurious
> -(i.e, the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
> +(i.e., the timeout would have been avoided had TCP set a
> longer retransmission timeout),
> TCP has several options concerning what to do next.
> Possible values are:
>
--
Michael Kerrisk
Linux man-pages maintainer; http://www.kernel.org/doc/man-pages/
Linux/UNIX System Programming Training: http://man7.org/training/
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2016-06-07 9:19 [PATCH 1/2] proc.5: tfix Jakub Wilk
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2016-06-07 9:19 ` [PATCH 2/2] clone.2, confstr.3, hpsa.4, tcp.7: tfix Jakub Wilk
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2016-06-08 9:24 ` Michael Kerrisk (man-pages) [this message]
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