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Or maybe an IP? Well spotted, thanks! Done. The de-dentation is only needed once the paragraph talks about both truncat= e and ioctl operations (patch 5/5). Must have happened when I reshuffled the pat= ch set. In patch 5/5 it becomes .P again. > > Whether an opened file can be truncated with > > .BR ftruncate (2) > > is determined during > > @@ -97,7 +100,6 @@ using Thanks, =E2=80=94G=C3=BCnther