From: Jeremy Kerr <jk@codeconstruct.com.au>
To: "Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)" <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
Cc: Michael Kerrisk <mtk.manpages@gmail.com>, linux-man@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support
Date: Mon, 18 Oct 2021 13:05:25 +0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <e6a15bfbb2337b78c9e1305956e71cebd7b4328f.camel@codeconstruct.com.au> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <97962dba-3787-2cd2-bc96-63b009ce9af8@gmail.com>
Hi Alex,
> Thanks for the manual page!
And thanks for the review! In general, I've updated to suit your
comments, just a couple of queries inline.
> > +.SH SYNOPSIS
> > +.nf
> > +.B #include <sys/socket.h>
> > +.B #include <linux/mctp.h>
> > +.PP
> > +.B mctp_socket = socket(AF_MCTP, SOCK_DGRAM, 0);
>
> mctp_socket is a variable name. See socket.7 for an example.
> It should be in italics.
This was based on udp.7; want me to send a patch for that too?
> > +Packets between a local and remote endpoint are identified by the
> > source
> > +and destination EIDs, plus a three-bit tag value.
> > +.PP
> > +Addressing data is passed in socket system calls through
> > +.B struct sockaddr\_mctp
>
> That escape is unnecessary. Did you see it in another page perhaps?
I thought I'd seen some odd line-breaks at the underscore, but can't
replicate that now. Will remove.
> > +typedef uint8_t mctp_eid_t;
> > +
> > +struct mctp_addr {
> > + mctp_eid_t s_addr;
> > +};
> > +
> > +struct sockaddr_mctp {
> > + unsigned short int smctp_family; /* = AF_MCTP */
>
> We only use 'int' in 'unsigned int', as the kernel does (or attempts
> to do). checkpatch.pl warns about 'unsigned short int', IIRC.
No, there are no warnings from checkpatch there; that's just copied from
the current kernel header.
However, I have just sent a separate patch to change that to
__kernel_sa_family_t. Should I use that here (keeping this an exact
match of the kernel header), or stick to the more familiar unsigned
short?
Cheers,
Jeremy
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-10-18 5:05 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-10-14 7:05 [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Jeremy Kerr
2021-10-17 18:49 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18 5:05 ` Jeremy Kerr [this message]
2021-10-18 5:57 ` G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18 7:16 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18 7:53 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-11-22 1:09 ` Suppressing hyphenation (was: [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support) G. Branden Robinson
2021-10-18 6:59 ` [PATCH] mctp.7: Add man page for Linux MCTP support Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
2021-10-18 7:46 ` Alejandro Colomar (man-pages)
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