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Subject: Re: [PATCH 02/35] DocBook: add a note about the ALSA API
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On Thu, 28 May 2015 18:49:05 -0300
Mauro Carvalho Chehab <mchehab@osg.samsung.com> wrote:

> +	<para>It should also be noticed that a media device may also have audio
> +	      components, like mixers, PCM capture, PCM playback, etc, with
> +	      are controlled via ALSA API.</para>

How about s/noticed/noted/ and s/with/which/ ?

jon