From: Ingo Molnar <mingo@kernel.org>
To: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
Cc: peterz@infradead.org, tglx@linutronix.de,
linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org,
linux-block@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@lge.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
Date: Wed, 8 Nov 2017 10:34:38 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20171108093438.t5zjpsgealkiamlh@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com>
* Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com> wrote:
> I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> have got much better english by others than me.
>
> But,
>
> I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> starting with a better one.
>
> In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
>
> ----->8-----
> From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
> Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
>
> The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> to enhance its readability.
>
> Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> ---
> Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------
Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and
various grammar mistakes...
Thanks,
Ingo
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2017-10-30 6:18 [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt Byungchul Park
2017-11-08 9:34 ` Ingo Molnar [this message]
2017-11-09 0:23 ` Byungchul Park
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