[PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

[PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

[Byungchul Park]

I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
have got much better english by others than me.

But,

I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
starting with a better one.

In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.

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Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

[Ingo Molnar]

* Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com> wrote:

> I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> have got much better english by others than me.
> 
> But,
> 
> I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> starting with a better one.
> 
> In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
> 
> ----->8-----
> From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
>  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
> 
> The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> to enhance its readability.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------

Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and 
various grammar mistakes...

Thanks,

	Ingo

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Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt

[Byungchul Park]

On Wed, Nov 08, 2017 at 10:34:38AM +0100, Ingo Molnar wrote:
> 
> * Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com> wrote:
> 
> > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can
> > have got much better english by others than me.
> > 
> > But,
> > 
> > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it
> > starting with a better one.
> > 
> > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible.
> > 
> > ----->8-----
> > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> > From: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900
> > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise
> >  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt
> > 
> > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it
> > to enhance its readability.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park <byungchul.park@lge.com>
> > ---
> >  Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------
> 
> Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and 
> various grammar mistakes...

Sure.. I have to.. I will look for a way and use it. Thanks a lot.

> Thanks,
> 
> 	Ingo

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