From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mail-wr0-f197.google.com (mail-wr0-f197.google.com [209.85.128.197]) by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B8D8A4403E0 for ; Wed, 8 Nov 2017 04:34:42 -0500 (EST) Received: by mail-wr0-f197.google.com with SMTP id v88so1038029wrb.22 for ; Wed, 08 Nov 2017 01:34:42 -0800 (PST) Received: from mail-sor-f41.google.com (mail-sor-f41.google.com. [209.85.220.41]) by mx.google.com with SMTPS id s193sor869081wme.84.2017.11.08.01.34.41 for (Google Transport Security); Wed, 08 Nov 2017 01:34:41 -0800 (PST) Date: Wed, 8 Nov 2017 10:34:38 +0100 From: Ingo Molnar Subject: Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt Message-ID: <20171108093438.t5zjpsgealkiamlh@gmail.com> References: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com> Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org List-ID: To: Byungchul Park Cc: peterz@infradead.org, tglx@linutronix.de, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-block@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@lge.com * Byungchul Park wrote: > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can > have got much better english by others than me. > > But, > > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it > starting with a better one. > > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible. > > ----->8----- > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Byungchul Park > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt > > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it > to enhance its readability. > > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park > --- > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------ Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and various grammar mistakes... Thanks, Ingo -- To unsubscribe, send a message with 'unsubscribe linux-mm' in the body to majordomo@kvack.org. For more info on Linux MM, see: http://www.linux-mm.org/ . Don't email: email@kvack.org