From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mail-pf0-f198.google.com (mail-pf0-f198.google.com [209.85.192.198]) by kanga.kvack.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D310044043C for ; Wed, 8 Nov 2017 19:23:57 -0500 (EST) Received: by mail-pf0-f198.google.com with SMTP id z80so3629808pff.11 for ; Wed, 08 Nov 2017 16:23:57 -0800 (PST) Received: from lgeamrelo11.lge.com (LGEAMRELO11.lge.com. [156.147.23.51]) by mx.google.com with ESMTP id b8si4993300ple.241.2017.11.08.16.23.56 for ; Wed, 08 Nov 2017 16:23:56 -0800 (PST) Date: Thu, 9 Nov 2017 09:23:47 +0900 From: Byungchul Park Subject: Re: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt Message-ID: <20171109002347.GA24935@X58A-UD3R> References: <1509344324-22399-1-git-send-email-byungchul.park@lge.com> <20171108093438.t5zjpsgealkiamlh@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20171108093438.t5zjpsgealkiamlh@gmail.com> Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org List-ID: To: Ingo Molnar Cc: peterz@infradead.org, tglx@linutronix.de, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-block@vger.kernel.org, kernel-team@lge.com On Wed, Nov 08, 2017 at 10:34:38AM +0100, Ingo Molnar wrote: > > * Byungchul Park wrote: > > > I'm afraid the revision is not perfect yet. Of course, the document can > > have got much better english by others than me. > > > > But, > > > > I think I should enhance it as much as I can, before they can help it > > starting with a better one. > > > > In addition, I removed verboseness as much as possible. > > > > ----->8----- > > From c7795104ca6ac6dd9f7fd944aee23a2011a6d3a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > > From: Byungchul Park > > Date: Mon, 30 Oct 2017 14:51:26 +0900 > > Subject: [PATCH] locking/lockdep: Revise > > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt > > > > The document should've been written with a better readability. Revise it > > to enhance its readability. > > > > Signed-off-by: Byungchul Park > > --- > > Documentation/locking/crossrelease.txt | 388 +++++++++++++++------------------ > > Could you please run a spellchecker over this text? It's still full of typos and > various grammar mistakes... Sure.. I have to.. I will look for a way and use it. Thanks a lot. > Thanks, > > Ingo -- To unsubscribe, send a message with 'unsubscribe linux-mm' in the body to majordomo@kvack.org. For more info on Linux MM, see: http://www.linux-mm.org/ . Don't email: email@kvack.org