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charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Stat-Signature: hyz7iyay7gwb14uhh9gcc65fo9mksase X-Spam-Status: No, score=-19.1 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-Rspamd-Server: rspam07 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 63B14C0009 X-Rspam-User: X-HE-Tag: 1793025077-255230 X-HE-Meta: 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 daU1uQOM bNGMwWMGoCRVxd8SvqCf6ALfsrcPNWWp0sFZJSNVGexYhFhh32cTzXRacANPtUdp6XbyKgNO7wXBrFh1/tUSCT1P+Bv6kuOOtp98WbqZ5tK96kUlZzbynrbPq/pntBaNBZypHGbVNwLFRFrzr5vzUYb9xzqeRM6ukpzx+aShQSYrfLiiIYDft8VnWnndRmgiV+dtOBNa51Wb0jW71LWlzYRFO6C+OMJhC4YK1IJQM599+Nir3u+TavhNHRdt/ATMYHCx8cGms34dz9VvG5jBdHaqBJkmaGEjA/8PhgZ2pLZ3MHkrp6Z34UXDGQXKwM7uoc4QNxl6JTEmKCuo= Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:44:55 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi Aveline, > > On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > > "converts it" refers to the access events, so I think it should be > > "them".  Rewrap the paragraph while at it. > > > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > > --- > >  Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst | 8 ++++---- > >  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > index 4a9db755a526..a93609649a5f 100644 > > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/stat.rst > > Here I found this one: > @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ enabled > > Enable or disable DAMON_STAT. > > -You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter as ``Y``. > -Setting it as ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by > +You can enable DAMON_STAT by setting the value of this parameter to ``Y``. > +Setting it to ``N`` disables DAMON_STAT. The default value is set by > ``CONFIG_DAMON_STAT_ENABLED_DEFAULT`` build config option. Thanks. Unless Aveline objects or add this part to the next revision of this patch, I will add this when I apply this patch to damon/next. > > > @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ estimated_memory_bandwidth > >  Estimated memory bandwidth consumption (bytes per second) of the system. > >   > >  DAMON_STAT reads observed access events on the current DAMON results snapshot > > -and converts it to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per second. > > -The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter.  Because > > -DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity rather > > -than accurate memory bandwidth. > > +and converts them to memory bandwidth consumption estimation in bytes per > > +second.  The resulting metric is exposed to user via this read-only parameter. > > +Because DAMON uses sampling, this is only an estimation of the access intensity > > +rather than accurate memory bandwidth. > >   > >  memory_idle_ms_percentiles > >  -------------------------- > > > Thanks, > Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Thank you for your review. Thanks, SJ