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 fb+KbZo9 iOJ9/9u/GmkUEZeWbhFDkpGLwEsM7RE6BWaUqhS+sMpvPrtqEd/FG4Y0RoW+13YS/gO5e7RAjTjLbqT3cHpr3ZVo/QXJLIxCwlgd9A4j7TjAvq9SSMBAD1DUvcpc9dgIa9qUsbguKYShrQ3JjZUCZwGWPQ1aREaIBuH1PyDmqkzdNT9unW2OHzAtW0dWz3Dikb/CrVfY74I4S7Wl3IXF2LZh4KfmabzdXcya9D0lstzRF+PFQHChz4zueJAg4xJVDPq8+tudi6dXrzBNAvlwbV++p8Q1UczAdSneK34gPgh8rnPvCVbANTm97hJA0qUtpDFpAdPAOHSfcan8FBjyOwDkBOLDWDodbPYhhMjzPMD/aUwLOBPQsuX2FOg== Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 13:57:49 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi again, > > On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > > Manuel's recent grammar fix for this file, now in damon/next, covered a > > good part of it.  This should take care of the few mistakes that are > > left, like "should automatically activated" and "Make DAMON_LRU_SORT > > reads".  Rewrap where the lines got too long. > > > > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > > --- > >  .../admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst         | 45 ++++++++++--------- > >  1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > > index aa4cc90ca57c..c628e3f6e587 100644 > > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > > @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ deprioritizing cold pages on their LRU-lists.  To avoid it consuming too much > >  CPU for the prioritizations, a CPU time usage limit can be configured.  Under > >  the limit, it prioritizes and deprioritizes more hot and cold pages first, > >  respectively.  System administrators can also configure under what situation > > -this scheme should automatically activated and deactivated with three memory > > +this scheme should be automatically activated and deactivated with three memory > > Yours isn't wrong but I would make it: > +this scheme should automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory > > Choose as you like. > > >  pressure watermarks. > >   > >  Its default parameters for hotness/coldness thresholds and CPU quota limit are > > @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ DAMON_LRU_SORT utilizes module parameters.  That is, you can put > >  ``damon_lru_sort.=`` on the kernel boot command line or write > >  proper values to ``/sys/module/damon_lru_sort/parameters/`` files. > >   > > -Below are the description of each parameter. > > +Below is the description of each parameter. > > My choice : > +Below are the descriptions of each parameter. > > > >  ... > Looks good to me. > > > > >  -------------------- > > @@ -310,7 +311,7 @@ Total bytes of hot memory regions that were successfully LRU-sorted. > >  nr_hot_quota_exceeds > >  -------------------- > >   > > -Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions have exceeded. > > +Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions has been exceeded. > > I would go for this, but I'm not sure: > +Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions have been exceeded. > > Number of times that ... have been exceeded. I have no strong opinion. Aveline, let me know if you have some. > > Thanks, > Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Thank you for review, Manuel. Thanks, SJ [...]