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b=Bc71X7f4rfISVUR0Q+mRib4UDa8SXxUWoc6UT2xY2SO2fApAG1z/OSEaUSnyeo4Br 8peydQWyrzSfkCwNYMC0wjL41Y0vFPFhG49//dKT9C7skO2pobu6cL9sgI2IRWlu4o LCLFeRqX9snStGV5ZPsMzuFhV2a4vDFLpw3qQjRgROrukMZhWJk9bl+Vj1m8QapCMg 5/imp6wcDRWsxCKqGsmloSl4mypLGVsPfloszOFnwWua1Q0pkxYFo81a0AtaiBXuNo o9q0MVyWgdBSoReJUwKntEURHZH5IqJKa6yRn11hDHMtu4D9d3rlafywHeTkxwFaHR smupkFF+1f5lg== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Aveline Noir Subject: Re: [PATCH] mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2026 17:11:39 -0700 Message-ID: <20261027001140.156967-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <72437017a038310cad48a5ff488377a9f8eb89f1.camel@mailbox.org> References: X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Server: rspam12 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 9FC14A0003 X-Stat-Signature: 4nos8r75jew9qqgnbpqttwx73ye4nek7 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-14.1 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS,SPF_PASS, USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-Rspam-User: X-HE-Tag: 1793059908-232877 X-HE-Meta: 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 B3+dBmSE K3lu43G6EaY8YA1aoNxhK51cBXNIcuGdCezFRvH7Ge9sbUaphnr/4i677lU6ClMHQL9FfxsvYnTtDCLEN1C3yZVfD/vhQ1aobx2oobqEIrcnayhUMdhHKQhkpGHwT+1LCzrsNrAsDLXQrHmFmykivj6QJpNG0DqMLQCoMa9r125DknGhSJVJcSjK5SOCDwS5iPH1sAetO/sNxFmvsKYO26JEVvxR6JyzkkKEtc+RyFVK2oWQmW7SKGkZrQ2IMUsfeDzA58zBndWVoAnsXV9vRhjBwxr3EI72prEniUIk2wOLL5OFmd2I4vjwHyT9DRa0hpPdE4lb5Y52bacyLo2WRnU/New== Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Mon, 26 Oct 2026 18:51:40 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi, > > took me some time to respond because of the procrastinations. No worry! > > On Sat, 2026-10-17 at 09:27 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > > On Sat, 17 Oct 2026 11:18:34 +0200 Manuel Ebner wrote: > > > > > Hi SJ, > > > > > > On Thu, 2026-10-15 at 07:01 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > > > > On Thu, 15 Oct 2026 10:06:23 +0200 Manuel Ebner wrote: > > > > > > > > > Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. > > > > > Rewrite complex sentences. > > > > > > > > Let's put two sentences in one line, while breaking it for the 75 column limit. > > > > > > Will do. > > > > > > > > [...] > > > > > @@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ quota_sz > > > > >   > > > > >  Limit of size of memory for the reclamation in bytes. > > > > >   > > > > > -DAMON_RECLAIM charges amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > > > -window (quota_reset_interval_ms) and makes no more than this limit is tried. > > > > > +DAMON_RECLAIM recordes the amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > > > > > > s/recordes/charges/  or s/recordes/records/ ? > > > > > > For me charge is such a weird word exepct in 'charge a battery' or 'charge a fee'. And > > > 'recordes' is a typo. Does this work: > > > > 'charge' in this sentence is somewhat like 'charge a fee'.  I personally don't > > feel it is weird.  But 'record' also work for me. > > I will keep 'charge' at the later mention in the file. Thank you for accepting my humble suggestion. [...] > > Sounds good.  But let's finish the discussion about use of the term, 'charge' > > before posting v2. > > Then I'll head to [v2] and make it a 2 part series. Looking forward to v2! Thanks, SJ [...]