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b=aw5uQyVcvUVcveSh7K0iQyIeOrp93TXa37xDmxv8jtEjFdd+gd12i98k4oFF+dLH7 Oc4j52g38SdjU3js+RwKx6LxGjjebgJAKoEDrJCIYpEBTKEpNo6QM8zB+4IRhiH3xU wXNcyQ6m36F8wiWEPFEpfd32LGh6R/MRBDZWfuPWyhZOWymY2uzK/KTRwKpN+NWLlv 2rOZWzSSRgNaHglsAcvMsafcZCaqlqV2RQ3Cx5ITiIeCeakq+Np6KEh4aOkhbywjWG DfU3ELOPRgKOPswvZAAQGZqpb3/yc/0Zb5gnbwqeuPrgwVGgF6r0RLinVG8tYXMxbd Y7RNSFD+Y4Ddw== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , corbet@lwn.net, damon@lists.linux.dev, jm5905938@gmail.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, rdunlap@infradead.org, skhan@linuxfoundation.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2026 17:06:36 -0700 Message-ID: <20261028000637.157110-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <20261027190503.2526945-2-manuelebnerli@mailbox.org> References: X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Server: rspam05 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 7BDD7120009 X-Stat-Signature: dcitj981775hrd4oizmiu4ofizp5pupt X-Rspam-User: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-19.1 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-HE-Tag: 1793146006-491514 X-HE-Meta: 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 eqaN2bj9 4w6j4abXvJ3WFIpNTRJDZOw3cZ9gQbRJN54zCY9AqSTNyE+c0DVgxWcYlrN5NW0WOJ7WT59fPUb/4wnG43+mog2OXjShkhY+a+cZnoTzzZSOIR6iPSiWVq4ZvFOM8+snsouEvFUGRAB6kOnA8Cl9IqvzWJlmziVOsltdb07osTot/1+6Ze8z8FdQ6iw7NHSiLcFvsRPUqjU3XmpbMXgPnVjDy35IaNcPjvFmaUEMh2/Nn4jw0hqxBAOylKxe/zVwqncDPb11aB1lVCxZvWn6O7NGwj1/RIpo0a1NL Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Tue, 27 Oct 2026 20:05:04 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Fix upper case. Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. Add space after > sentence to make it double space. > > Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner > CC: Aveline Noir > --- > @ -113,8 +113,8 > Choose as you wish. > > @ 20 > should be: > -Free Pages Reporting [3]_ based > +Free pages reporting [3]_ based > or > +'*Free Pages Reporting'* [3]_ based > * the right kind of quoting/ kernel-doc highlighting. > Choose as you wish. > --- > .../admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst | 36 +++++++++---------- > 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > index e4e2ffa52e..0bab2299ea 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst [...] > @@ -30,12 +30,12 @@ guests could mitigate this problem. > How It Works? > ============= > > -DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that didn't accessed for specific time > +DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that weren't accessed for specific time > duration and page out. To avoid it consuming too much CPU for the paging out > operation, a speed limit can be configured. Under the speed limit, it pages > -out memory regions that didn't accessed longer time first. System > +out memory regions that weren't accessed longer time first. System > administrators can also configure under what situation this scheme should > -automatically activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. > +automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. Let's keep 80 columns limit. Same for below. [...] > @@ -113,10 +113,10 @@ quota_sz > > Limit of size of memory for the reclamation in bytes. > > -DAMON_RECLAIM charges amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > -window (quota_reset_interval_ms) and makes no more than this limit is tried. > -This can be used for limiting consumption of CPU and IO. If this value is > -zero, the limit is disabled. > +DAMON_RECLAIM records the amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time Didn't we agree to keep use "charge" ? Other than the above two things, looks good to me. Thanks, SJ [...]