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b=ohR3uX7weE4E0JafS6YBZO4ZKoCy6PK+GGlCc+DDD1vXXdFOppaZrcuc+Duf1bUUW G5yCdo83B+NdZ2HDqz/uhRIhXS1SPF3fmOxELysSXn1N3LUl2FMbyslQW8oN8KTPVE XGsa2KWyu6KZlHdQoc+XIaSHHlO6poF06gOnt9/9057jrug7r8htJAsHmkBQcTd6yV HKh3hl8A7whynE82pK3aNxX2CSbjcVGyoPIha2pEWWOAbmdVDNvX/zK587kk32/PkY EecpCI6DuRlQ7PO4+4OUUjsoQ2bwTIIhFVWubQb3wEBk6Nb95N4rV9KLddCRvfvdu5 ppGEL8nR77/4g== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , corbet@lwn.net, damon@lists.linux.dev, jm5905938@gmail.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-mm@kvack.org, rdunlap@infradead.org, skhan@linuxfoundation.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 1/2] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve grammar and style Date: Wed, 28 Oct 2026 17:19:19 -0700 Message-ID: <20261029001920.166896-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <1303b843e41498612cce4acdbb47941c054bcf7d.camel@mailbox.org> References: X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Server: rspam12 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: AF00E180003 X-Stat-Signature: yqapt4h3yi4gwg7kj96493iawkuoih54 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-18.8 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-Rspam-User: X-HE-Tag: 1793233168-277902 X-HE-Meta: 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 KVjyT+ym lDaA+PhICmp0PXIBUJ9BtthZwnwIsnqfIRlYWAiF/+J5cZbd5EBsDUwo65AT9qH3JyJgregw0z1cfd/4xnEf1SEfho3BvTThXaptoqt576d7Wms2IHMYRDc4ZPy8UtLP8gjE5Q2mt7Y76L4nrz/0BItqUeVSjbrDVmXsnOq+7Bb9QxHMQ4gtTGhRE+49EPOQ/GaKBxg4NlDneINOeigiEIErj7fobrkZ9HXPqDLpsz+oJAaQYXggcS+NzDPV0LQV2l6Zp3Q4dC1GAZ77NNSqEo7ipc8qRY/hFmyq4qOCxt55+gX90E2mBA/OrUad+//LTSooFcdRa6VxlbJk= Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Wed, 28 Oct 2026 17:52:01 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Hi SJ, > > On Tue, 2026-10-27 at 17:06 -0700, SJ Park wrote: > > On Tue, 27 Oct 2026 20:05:04 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > > > > > Fix upper case. Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. Add space after > > > sentence to make it double space. > > > > > > Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner > > > CC: Aveline Noir > > > --- > > > @ -113,8 +113,8 > > > Choose as you wish. > > I will refer to this below. > > > > > > > @ 20 > > > should be: > > > -Free Pages Reporting [3]_ based > > > +Free pages reporting [3]_ based > > > or > > > +'*Free Pages Reporting'* [3]_ based > > > * the right kind of quoting/ kernel-doc highlighting. > > > Choose as you wish. > > > --- > > >  .../admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst          | 36 +++++++++---------- > > >  1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) > > > > > > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > > > index e4e2ffa52e..0bab2299ea 100644 > > > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > > > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > > [...] > > > @@ -30,12 +30,12 @@ guests could mitigate this problem. > > >  How It Works? > > >  ============= > > >   > > > -DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that didn't accessed for specific time > > > +DAMON_RECLAIM finds memory regions that weren't accessed for specific time > > >  duration and page out.  To avoid it consuming too much CPU for the paging out > > >  operation, a speed limit can be configured.  Under the speed limit, it pages > > > -out memory regions that didn't accessed longer time first.  System > > > +out memory regions that weren't accessed longer time first.  System > > >  administrators can also configure under what situation this scheme should > > > -automatically activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. > > > +automatically be activated and deactivated with three memory pressure watermarks. > > > > Let's keep 80 columns limit.  Same for below. > > Okay. > > > [...] > > > @@ -113,10 +113,10 @@ quota_sz > > >   > > >  Limit of size of memory for the reclamation in bytes. > > >   > > > -DAMON_RECLAIM charges amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > -window (quota_reset_interval_ms) and makes no more than this limit is tried. > > > -This can be used for limiting consumption of CPU and IO.  If this value is > > > -zero, the limit is disabled. > > > +DAMON_RECLAIM records the amount of memory which it tried to reclaim within a time > > > > Didn't we agree to keep use "charge" ? > > I thought we agreed to "records' but I sensed a misunderstanding. That's why I wrote > > > @ -113,8 +113,8 > > > Choose as you wish. > above. Should i have been more explicit? Sorry, my bio memory easily be stale. Anyway, my impression was that we agreed 'charge' is not really difficult term and therefore keep using it. Maybe you were saying that only for the paragraph we discussed about if the term should be explicitly explained. If you don't mind, I'd prefer keep using 'charge' here for consistency. What do you think? Thanks, SJ [...]