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b=i7EFxg3V7LiVQlqu8g676hJBANeRvsSGORz8SVztNkzVPMstOH8WIxPuhsKQjBDCt Jmw3i2bsC8Nr9dlBur0QU12T0/idc3zOpSS4jruSjYWDlqHDfphVroG5rpf0HOkwY7 d3tPTNrgnLhntZI+F9MEB3J34SQ0hvuSOqL2dIVjnS3bElYdlmrJ4GUurhiPgO7312 0hdKRAcooUqT9/OF/D3wsE1mAW7cMg4am0VtyypFQDLBQDzoSCjuQZxP6EobwPLLlt JpVGZ1H8EptRPXzvCCNasSFlCEErCWvk/Cqjj0KmyQhweuHYzUpdyX3q3fjT2zYGb/ OvneJ4V790e/Q== From: SJ Park To: Manuel Ebner Cc: SJ Park , Jonathan Corbet , Shuah Khan , Randy Dunlap , Aveline Noir , damon@lists.linux.dev, linux-mm@kvack.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Docs/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim: improve language Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2026 07:05:28 -0800 Message-ID: <20261103150528.88546-1-sj@kernel.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.47.3 In-Reply-To: <20261103120043.100887-2-manuelebnerli@mailbox.org> References: X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Server: rspam03 X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 0F6CD140006 X-Stat-Signature: 3zsqrad71wjtnykkrdaf6gbxpf7zs4k5 X-Rspam-User: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-18.8 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIMWL_WL_HIGH, DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS,USER_AGENT_GIT autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-HE-Tag: 1793718336-69967 X-HE-Meta: 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 7AN7Y04F s1aOCQgeDdgzBNKTG2cOurOhbrKs48L5YcaAKXCT5d5zZTqbGCYXFYznV+UTXJCtKuZzccz6pL8fKsceR6I9eRdFdOOLOL/Q89W1UgAylurG/7NUGV+5fTOOLvwXvkH0A7xutBqlFQsaieP6w8G8WCubJqACLzoROIiqWb9PxX2xm+ESZYcHEZFwHkDOSbNBZ4ch0R8fsxYLBqxzBSvAfemXSQ5KSIf06tNV33xG3DmZepuQnQ70t/SCeQ61f1u08hnQcWmKzRBNut5TcU5+/1gs3L+KfoQkgat98OxglU91j+C6gEClytZsGwuIafDK1nFWD4wdF0ZJ0DORg7MF68/F0Uw== Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 Hello Manuel, On Tue, 3 Nov 2026 13:00:42 +0100 Manuel Ebner wrote: > Fix upper case. Fix tenses. Replace 'set as' with 'set to'. Add space after Please wrap lines for 75 chars per line, from the next time. Otherwise, checkpatch.pl will warn like below: WARNING: Prefer a maximum 75 chars per line (possible unwrapped commit description?) > sentence to make it double space. Rewrite and refine complex sentences. > > CC: Aveline Noir > Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner > --- > That's the final version. Thank you for revisioning. [...] > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/reclaim.rst > @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ > DAMON-based Reclamation > ======================= > > -DAMON-based Reclamation (DAMON_RECLAIM) is a static kernel module that aimed to > +DAMON-based reclamation (DAMON_RECLAIM) is a static kernel module that aimes to Sashiko suggested [1] s/aimes/aims/ ? [...] > @@ -88,7 +89,7 @@ identifies the region as cold, and reclaims it. > autotune_monitoring_intervals > ----------------------------- > > -If this parameter is set as ``Y``, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically tunes DAMON's > +If this parameter is set to ``Y``, DAMON_RECLAIM automatically tunes DAMON's > sampling and aggregation intervals. The auto-tuning aims to capture meaningful > amount of access events in each DAMON-snapshot, while keeping the sampling > interval 5 milliseconds in minimum, and 10 seconds in maximum. Setting this as Sashiko also suggested [1] to update above 'Setting this as' to 'Setting this to'. Other than above two, Reviewed-by: SJ Park Assuming you don't mind accepting above two Sashiko suggestions, I applied this patch with the suggested changes to damon/next [1] tree. I will repost it soon (~1 week) as an mm.git merge request. So, no action from your side is needed for now. [1] https://lore.kernel.org [2] https://origin.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/mm/damon/maintainer-profile.html#scm-trees Thanks, SJ [...]