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charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable User-Agent: Evolution 3.60.2 (3.60.2-1.fc44) X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 X-MBO-RS-META: oduzt75dmocrdjqeru19648ieiwqcoim X-MBO-RS-ID: bcd2318e5fcca3399dd X-Rspam-User: X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 11B0716000B X-Stat-Signature: fx1hj6gmytsrsi7bhkzpqg5wakq15wes X-Rspamd-Server: rspam01 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.8 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-HE-Tag: 1793018497-524314 X-HE-Meta: U2FsdGVkX18QP9jUG4gPaPJHbOzqylcyik3i7lDv0ETtCmasMlGnXUaLlGG3ZVjsH6oB36Dy+X+/VXb6Yo6TG0ubG6RSPKqeBLySPd+Sj5SuZt9UjtRpAYHsyGUviiLAqG2XMtSMkBiDbrnDo8kWuF1N55DMG7c0jtHub9LWJLpEbsG6IlaAv030X+V++tJffX6LNVWWgBKJQPouXAYsPxHf3nd9/81JvglHFXVb7DJIWvPFgP2P1ZfUbL3ndfh2ljB+6QgsEhhHwzeQkbmDFE0sNP9FS9hJ7s1iQTYn32EYYS51XH3w91/8Q958T12k84vY2A9CVN+7sbMm7RUiScpL2PFLwkc/LqFnwlYk3lerldOIG8oWVyMSXINq6o546r70I9fZAwXekmZfHRxK6QP/vP4Lhtq77dUc2PZ4SuMYllRrKIqjwpGqzGUL+X8n3dorIXqTx3vJ8XVvhpJCmQrcuXkknyRzo5MrmFaqzDL+uGLM4wPdBE7i2SF8uVZ5aa5vLR+Rr7ffmeY+rvO/hJyDCUXa8ON56MeWKQJpyrFUUVahFrvi/kaChb4JeXLEe0ITjcLJlVOIeubTNn3SayaiGpRoYn85/V0N2NGIfkK76p71Q3s+FRgGVCZEk5PiQnzqwE5Bx2KyBTAyeMvpmeu0iObRrCKklTMvwTd7MJeieWvlQWzbPoqM2Xjf/o1qqppF4iuogPa0P4gkBQzw4H6h9bc1uaotV8x+J80K032UzzIGqMDR525ZOuv/oFGhApzQyukU0Nz2c9R6KHPVa5on4U+FeBrosnWS684ZGpWSKjYfkoZyVJf1/8gw886xxe1fhOGnHG5mCRGX1JHzcFIbSma3mkTRU9pXhs2Y4YposaotHnxg7AKTD78kr9Fw0jBnLTAPe8lAQHjSz8Wyg+zkrU15ytKyQktneahYyKxGXtyeHocCOKi87nck3h8OVPAKKuBMT/69dedArrL FR3uotGI rIVlg+NoNYmOucqoVro0sX9DBSuEQnoPUSoEyd0xm+6QTqmcOX4YDg+e2C0aNBt9L2BrGq+GaAwdbAd4yqXzuyknqzhXAAWu1vKe49CtvMJyVkyl3liDbb0hBp0xbrtobrtHxXclMWc0c40oiv8MufPNpXO07CguIZcgVqVKrxAN1YxN1xdBCkugh1j17ZHL50cqh7VaBfZi2t/wVvvrN+A1l01mId1R2c34ikiw9oPMuzQKLgSepPS+ESCu3vigMRjPm6UVOQiWiB2xguwByNqCryQ5LSdwVOSneYh1Oj+DNsTa6R6Okjud0j6OHlP+KPOJyj2V3V825aUc= Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > Fix a few grammar slips in the getting-started guide, like "make DAMON > monitors" and a region "that has not accessed". >=20 > "The line of the commands" used to be "The first two lines".=C2=A0 With o= nly > one masim line left, I make it "The first line".=20 >=20 > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > --- > =C2=A0Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst | 10 +++++----- > =C2=A01 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst b/Documentation= /admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > index d98b0eb8e771..a83fcc2265bd 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/start.rst > @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ the execution. :: > =C2=A0 > =C2=A0The first command of the above example downloads and builds an arti= ficial > =C2=A0memory access generator program called ``masim``.=C2=A0 The second = command asks DAMO > -to start the program via the given command and make DAMON monitors the n= ewly > +to start the program via the given command and make DAMON monitor the ne= wly 'The second command asks ... and makes ...' Thus: +to start the program via the given command and makes DAMON monitor the new= ly > =C2=A0started process.=C2=A0 The third command retrieves the current snap= shot of the > =C2=A0monitored access pattern of the process from DAMON and shows the pa= ttern in a > =C2=A0human readable format. > @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ human readable format. > =C2=A0The first line of the output shows the relative access temperature = (hotness) of > =C2=A0the regions in a single row heatmap format.=C2=A0 Each column on th= e heatmap > =C2=A0represents regions of same size on the monitored virtual address sp= ace.=C2=A0 The > -position of the column on the row and the number on the column represent= s the > +position of the column on the row and the number on the column represent= the > =C2=A0relative location and access temperature of the region.=C2=A0 ``[..= .]`` means > =C2=A0unmapped huge regions on the virtual address spaces.=C2=A0 The seco= nd line shows > =C2=A0additional information for better understanding the heatmap. I have read the damon directory aswell but I didn't find enought to send a = patch yet. But I found this, could you add it to your patch? @@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ additional information for better understanding the heatm= ap. =20 Each line of the output from the third line shows which virtual address ra= nge (``addr XX size XX``) of the process is how frequently (``access XX %``) -accessed for how long time (``age XX``). For example, the eleventh region= of -~9.5 MiB size is being most frequently accessed for last 3.7 seconds. Fin= ally, +accessed for how long (``age XX``). For example, the eleventh region of +~9.5 MiB size is being most frequently accessed for the last 3.7 seconds. = Finally, the fourth command stops DAMON. Rest looks good to me: Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner Thanks > ...