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From: Dave Hansen <dave.hansen@intel.com>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>, Kai Huang <kai.huang@intel.com>
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, kvm@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-mm@kvack.org, seanjc@google.com, pbonzini@redhat.com,
	dan.j.williams@intel.com, rafael.j.wysocki@intel.com,
	kirill.shutemov@linux.intel.com, reinette.chatre@intel.com,
	len.brown@intel.com, tony.luck@intel.com, peterz@infradead.org,
	ak@linux.intel.com, isaku.yamahata@intel.com, chao.gao@intel.com,
	sathyanarayanan.kuppuswamy@linux.intel.com, sagis@google.com,
	imammedo@redhat.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v6 21/21] Documentation/x86: Add documentation for TDX host support
Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2022 07:16:04 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <c2145924-2448-4606-3de5-65df8da017ce@intel.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <Y1vQd+HGhfxkHQrz@debian.me>

On 10/28/22 05:52, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> -architecture doesn't require the BIOS to load the TDX module, but the
> -kernel assumes it is loaded by the BIOS.
> +architecture doesn't require the BIOS to load the TDX module, however the
> +kernel assumes that it is loaded by the BIOS.

Hi Bagas,

I just read the first hunk of your suggestions.  What Kai had was fine.
There's no reason to change "but" to "however".  Both are, to my eye,
perfectly fine.

I appreciate that these suggestions are trying to improve things.  But,
I don't think they're an appreciable improvement.

OK, I lied.  I went and read one more random hunk:

> -Currently the kernel doesn't handle hot-removal of convertible memory but
> -depends on the BIOS to behave correctly.
> +Currently the kernel that hot-removal but assumes that BIOS behaves
> +correctly.

This turns a perfectly good sentence into gibberish.  It makes Kai's
documentation demonstrably worse.  To make matters worse, it's mixed in
with those arbitrary changes like but->however to make it harder to find.

Please stop sending these patches.  They're not helping.  In fact, they
are consuming reviewer and contributor time, so they're actually making
the situation _worse_.


  reply	other threads:[~2022-10-28 14:16 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 46+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-10-26 23:15 [PATCH v6 00/21] TDX host kernel support Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 01/21] x86/tdx: Use enum to define page level of TDX supported page sizes Kai Huang
2022-10-27  7:08   ` Xiaoyao Li
2022-10-27  8:42     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-27 13:51       ` Kirill A. Shutemov
2022-10-28  0:47         ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-27 22:28       ` Isaku Yamahata
2022-10-27 15:27   ` Dave Hansen
2022-10-28  0:10     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 02/21] x86/virt/tdx: Detect TDX during kernel boot Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 03/21] x86/virt/tdx: Disable TDX if X2APIC is not enabled Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 04/21] x86/virt/tdx: Use all boot-time system memory as TDX memory Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 05/21] x86/virt/tdx: Add skeleton to initialize TDX on demand Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 06/21] x86/virt/tdx: Implement functions to make SEAMCALL Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 07/21] x86/virt/tdx: Shut down TDX module in case of error Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 08/21] x86/virt/tdx: Do TDX module global initialization Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 09/21] x86/virt/tdx: Do logical-cpu scope TDX module initialization Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 10/21] x86/virt/tdx: Get information about TDX module and TDX-capable memory Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 11/21] x86/virt/tdx: Sanity check all TDX memory ranges are convertible memory Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 12/21] x86/virt/tdx: Add placeholder to construct TDMRs to cover all TDX memory regions Kai Huang
2022-10-27 15:31   ` Andi Kleen
2022-10-28  2:21     ` Huang, Kai
2022-11-03  8:55       ` Huang, Kai
2022-11-03 15:05     ` Dave Hansen
2022-11-03 22:07       ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 13/21] x86/virt/tdx: Create " Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 14/21] x86/virt/tdx: Allocate and set up PAMTs for TDMRs Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 15/21] x86/virt/tdx: Set up reserved areas for all TDMRs Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 16/21] x86/virt/tdx: Reserve TDX module global KeyID Kai Huang
2022-10-27 12:40   ` Andi Kleen
2022-10-28  1:24     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 17/21] x86/virt/tdx: Configure TDX module with TDMRs and " Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 18/21] x86/virt/tdx: Configure global KeyID on all packages Kai Huang
2022-10-27 12:35   ` Andi Kleen
2022-10-28  1:07     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 19/21] x86/virt/tdx: Initialize all TDMRs Kai Huang
2022-10-27 12:30   ` Andi Kleen
2022-10-28  1:08     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 20/21] x86/virt/tdx: Flush cache in kexec() when TDX is enabled Kai Huang
2022-10-26 23:16 ` [PATCH v6 21/21] Documentation/x86: Add documentation for TDX host support Kai Huang
2022-10-27 12:38   ` Andi Kleen
2022-10-28  2:31     ` Huang, Kai
2022-10-28 12:52   ` Bagas Sanjaya
2022-10-28 14:16     ` Dave Hansen [this message]
2022-10-26 23:26 ` [PATCH v6 00/21] TDX host kernel support Dave Hansen
2022-10-26 23:51   ` Huang, Kai

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