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charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable User-Agent: Evolution 3.60.2 (3.60.2-1.fc44) X-Archived-By: MIME-Version: 1.0 X-MBO-RS-META: nzgmngh1z81sf44u537fisxxmnjw44kz X-MBO-RS-ID: c5f618f06e0dfd708bf X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 07521100005 X-Stat-Signature: z9woh8asy998ye4aiobuqz9zej6byhdr X-Rspamd-Server: rspam04 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-15.8 required=3.0 tests=BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,HEADER_FROM_DIFFERENT_DOMAINS, INCLUDES_CR_TRAILER,INCLUDES_PATCH,MAILING_LIST_MULTI,SPF_HELO_PASS, SPF_PASS autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 X-Rspam-User: X-HE-Tag: 1793019474-501911 X-HE-Meta: U2FsdGVkX18mMeHn+HZkO3pONg4arxL0hLgtYdHeP20iH8qILhItZH5R64qua5db7qdW7f04jKxNVlK9xUXEQsu9OKc5JKrptoxVeoHzQpQYy/q98T2fD5cQc9D71GrP6NWycQQGa1Qd0htkC5fNLRQT/eTzPbuipVAFFMAJHQXLQsjtSSoVz2Mna4q+Vz7mzPs3JB1vrC5Qj1VzgFexXWxUZ9n++Hka25Gzwt5bNijXI/BqYhs9rS8+gBtiXHrh4svtFPBSnqT/tsZhTr0RAOTn3MNlwIT1Xj6HqaUXvPqMJKqwa1LjwkZURJFh8AFMxs4eetNG+X6A+zs+8an0RTSj7RunINkywSaNUwqQaEQoQAvZv48mQSpLPe+BVK4AVY6PCY2lHZJt+TSE2ejZL231MC/zd70DUXmMmWOWrFsqtFpVEf8OV5AkiG8k3Z6yM6xGMlEca5nv184vpIaw4LJUn/PILh9hwqNnfPcTsGn8S00+F9j4C8jKxcAeAteZEi3x8668wJ1qUNM2YfLt1Dju7rhDWNyBfH9fnCo1LHNZ29CCZV9M/o3s1NKGd4jF8tl3JOmib7qyEa3ATSbicTl3obTvysbKGaEVxAss9neLMr8sR3s43neMMHfmgUMuJd4+hVUZRosXKYWlrHeCuHlKjg9cqrgenF+OpLB25bojUGei9nx2dAb4Yw/tBfX1srGEw7y7xh+RrreOfyIkax//XaTBVJG6O46mOTa+4relrZZZoTloTaTeHU7uaSTEfrDu9v35iP9Fl5ZOlbj7EhmywmzqiNaeclcdHNQItbUc4+R7/UcOwq+YzcZjPtvIlk7voSkT/CAo2bc1UHFLWHNEyAg163WLFXsEX5MMafYya4K9/JSIZ0r1ChvsFKw59Lecl886Jvk22iJm7U6ECK0M2QP0FqUKPa3S03rfgbB5vOd4JuES/wmQsSgioU7XA0aytkRxSsI8Sw1/tHP HwCtWISk REik4e4oK3Uiu18+E8BO+KG8zEk7AKtz6nsoT83vx02SBMwsE3jXGpRF0hU0cBVQdDdWWGtzRSk2amE07tT2qyOk/dp6wmWT+yaJItHtutsptHkpM18LbbGOi26Xk4g4vNrsq8gKdueZX+Ut45sfN1AkmiN66Ud4A5snXiB4U2NJ+NrDXhMFP6c9Cr1AM/tKjezRNV7+6KTUWLAolRYfhqQ4DOhLNlldnYj3Qvi3svEr8kdb3mnEmttzYlbZX5bceSlDH8U5EVQJJJJCRUFs4UFDOFXJvy+oByR3wRgO9Wm68aDSbOnnssyWrZZbMGmclV/N8aun3B3C+bqRXlfpIgAk/scBYrA5onWfwcbEB3RZRTj+7L/TYO3pxDA== Sender: owner-linux-mm@kvack.org Precedence: bulk X-Loop: owner-majordomo@kvack.org List-ID: List-Subscribe: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on aws-us-west-2-korg-listserv-alma10-1 Hi again, On Mon, 2026-10-26 at 22:14 +1100, Aveline Noir wrote: > Manuel's recent grammar fix for this file, now in damon/next, covered a > good part of it.=C2=A0 This should take care of the few mistakes that are > left, like "should automatically activated" and "Make DAMON_LRU_SORT > reads".=C2=A0 Rewrap where the lines got too long. >=20 > Signed-off-by: Aveline Noir > --- > =C2=A0.../admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0= =C2=A0=C2=A0=C2=A0 | 45 ++++++++++--------- > =C2=A01 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst b/Documentat= ion/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > index aa4cc90ca57c..c628e3f6e587 100644 > --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/mm/damon/lru_sort.rst > @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ deprioritizing cold pages on their LRU-lists.=C2=A0 To = avoid it consuming too much > =C2=A0CPU for the prioritizations, a CPU time usage limit can be configur= ed.=C2=A0 Under > =C2=A0the limit, it prioritizes and deprioritizes more hot and cold pages= first, > =C2=A0respectively.=C2=A0 System administrators can also configure under = what situation > -this scheme should automatically activated and deactivated with three me= mory > +this scheme should be automatically activated and deactivated with three= memory Yours isn't wrong but I would make it: +this scheme should automatically be activated and deactivated with three m= emory Choose as you like. > =C2=A0pressure watermarks. > =C2=A0 > =C2=A0Its default parameters for hotness/coldness thresholds and CPU quot= a limit are > @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ DAMON_LRU_SORT utilizes module parameters.=C2=A0 That i= s, you can put > =C2=A0``damon_lru_sort.=3D`` on the kernel boot command= line or write > =C2=A0proper values to ``/sys/module/damon_lru_sort/parameters/`` files. > =C2=A0 > -Below are the description of each parameter. > +Below is the description of each parameter. My choice :=20 +Below are the descriptions of each parameter. > =C2=A0... Looks good to me. >=20 > =C2=A0-------------------- > @@ -310,7 +311,7 @@ Total bytes of hot memory regions that were successfu= lly LRU-sorted. > =C2=A0nr_hot_quota_exceeds > =C2=A0-------------------- > =C2=A0 > -Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions have exceeded. > +Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions has been excee= ded. I would go for this, but I'm not sure: +Number of times that the time quota limit for hot regions have been exceed= ed. Number of times that ... have been exceeded. Thanks, Reviewed-by: Manuel Ebner > =C2=A0...