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On Mon, 2013-03-04 at 10:36 -0800, Brian Norris wrote:
> > +        * These are the new chips with large page size, page size and
> > +        * eraseblock size is determined from the extended id bytes.
> 
> This is also incorrect grammar. It uses a comma to divide sentences
> and also uses "is". I would write something like this:
> 
> "These are the new chips with large page size. Their page size and
> eraseblock size are determined from the extended ID bytes."

Thanks Brian, will fix.

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Artem Bityutskiy