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Tue, 24 Jun 2025 23:34:16 -0700 (PDT) Received: from archie.me ([103.124.138.155]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 98e67ed59e1d1-315f53bdbf4sm967119a91.22.2025.06.24.23.34.14 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Tue, 24 Jun 2025 23:34:15 -0700 (PDT) Received: by archie.me (Postfix, from userid 1000) id E4D274207D12; Wed, 25 Jun 2025 13:34:11 +0700 (WIB) Date: Wed, 25 Jun 2025 13:34:11 +0700 From: Bagas Sanjaya To: Alok Tiwari , linux-nvme@lists.infradead.org, rdunlap@infradead.org, kbusch@kernel.org, axboe@kernel.dk, hch@lst.de, sagi@grimberg.me, kch@nvidia.com, nilay@linux.ibm.com, corbet@lwn.net Cc: linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 5/5] docs: nvme: fix grammar in nvme-pci-endpoint-target.rst Message-ID: References: <20250625041643.174110-1-alok.a.tiwari@oracle.com> <20250625041643.174110-6-alok.a.tiwari@oracle.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="K9CDCDqAKhwmhjDL" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20250625041643.174110-6-alok.a.tiwari@oracle.com> X-CRM114-Version: 20100106-BlameMichelson ( TRE 0.8.0 (BSD) ) MR-646709E3 X-CRM114-CacheID: sfid-20250624_233417_739404_2609F843 X-CRM114-Status: GOOD ( 24.68 ) X-BeenThere: linux-nvme@lists.infradead.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.34 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Sender: "Linux-nvme" Errors-To: linux-nvme-bounces+linux-nvme=archiver.kernel.org@lists.infradead.org --K9CDCDqAKhwmhjDL Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, Jun 24, 2025 at 09:16:34PM -0700, Alok Tiwari wrote: > diff --git a/Documentation/nvme/nvme-pci-endpoint-target.rst b/Documentat= ion/nvme/nvme-pci-endpoint-target.rst > index b699595d1762b..2f75c8a267de5 100644 > --- a/Documentation/nvme/nvme-pci-endpoint-target.rst > +++ b/Documentation/nvme/nvme-pci-endpoint-target.rst > @@ -6,20 +6,20 @@ NVMe PCI Endpoint Function Target > =20 > :Author: Damien Le Moal > =20 > -The NVMe PCI endpoint function target driver implements a NVMe PCIe cont= roller > -using a NVMe fabrics target controller configured with the PCI transport= type. > +The NVMe PCI endpoint function target driver implements an NVMe PCIe con= troller > +using an NVMe fabrics target controller configured with the PCI transpor= t type. > =20 > Overview > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > =20 > -The NVMe PCI endpoint function target driver allows exposing a NVMe targ= et > +The NVMe PCI endpoint function target driver allows exposing an NVMe tar= get > controller over a PCIe link, thus implementing an NVMe PCIe device simil= ar to a > regular M.2 SSD. The target controller is created in the same manner as = when > using NVMe over fabrics: the controller represents the interface to an N= VMe > subsystem using a port. The port transfer type must be configured to be > "pci". The subsystem can be configured to have namespaces backed by regu= lar > files or block devices, or can use NVMe passthrough to expose to the PCI= host an > -existing physical NVMe device or a NVMe fabrics host controller (e.g. a = NVMe TCP > +existing physical NVMe device or an NVMe fabrics host controller (e.g. a= NVMe TCP > host controller). > =20 > The NVMe PCI endpoint function target driver relies as much as possible = on the > @@ -181,10 +181,10 @@ Creating an NVMe endpoint device is a two step proc= ess. First, an NVMe target > subsystem and port must be defined. Second, the NVMe PCI endpoint device= must > be setup and bound to the subsystem and port created. > =20 > -Creating a NVMe Subsystem and Port > ----------------------------------- > +Creating an NVMe Subsystem and Port > +----------------------------------- > =20 > -Details about how to configure a NVMe target subsystem and port are outs= ide the > +Details about how to configure an NVMe target subsystem and port are out= side the > scope of this document. The following only provides a simple example of = a port > and subsystem with a single namespace backed by a null_blk device. > =20 > @@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ Finally, create the target port and link it to the su= bsystem:: > # ln -s /sys/kernel/config/nvmet/subsystems/nvmepf.0.nqn \ > /sys/kernel/config/nvmet/ports/1/subsystems/nvmepf.0.nqn > =20 > -Creating a NVMe PCI Endpoint Device > ------------------------------------ > +Creating an NVMe PCI Endpoint Device > +------------------------------------ > =20 > With the NVMe target subsystem and port ready for use, the NVMe PCI endp= oint > device can now be created and enabled. The NVMe PCI endpoint target driv= er > @@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ device controller:: > =20 > nvmet_pci_epf nvmet_pci_epf.0: Enabling controller > =20 > -On the host side, the NVMe PCI endpoint function target device will is > +On the host side, the NVMe PCI endpoint function target device is > discoverable as a PCI device, with the vendor ID and device ID as config= ured:: > =20 > # lspci -n LGTM, thanks! Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya --=20 An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara --K9CDCDqAKhwmhjDL Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEABYKAB0WIQSSYQ6Cy7oyFNCHrUH2uYlJVVFOowUCaFuYYwAKCRD2uYlJVVFO o+PHAQCE+vUOXn1bwzmLgPVFqN1ctK+E0hBGYsbXnSjp1YwkaQD/VheYmW0A5xSG N42MKwkgxkBAeH0q5RtTr7GF1IFBgw4= =vspR -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --K9CDCDqAKhwmhjDL--