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From: weibu@redadmin.org
To: Greg KH <gregkh@linuxfoundation.org>
Cc: linux-staging@lists.linux.dev, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] staging: rtl8723bs: xmit: fix grammar in comment
Date: Wed, 17 Sep 2025 15:23:18 +0900	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <2a4eef3ad872c923be7b0070056b5a8b@redadmin.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <2025091705-murky-sage-465f@gregkh>

Thanks, Greg.

Sorry for the off-list reply; resending to the lists.
You're right about the extra space; I dropped it. To avoid the "number 
of"
confusion I rephrased the sentence to "Total page count is not 
available, so
update current FIFO status." Sent as v2.

Best,
Akiyoshi

2025-09-17 14:52 に Greg KH さんは書きました:
> On Wed, Sep 17, 2025 at 02:39:44PM +0900, Akiyoshi Kurita wrote:
>> Fix 'number of page' -> 'number of pages' in a comment.
>> 
>> Signed-off-by: Akiyoshi Kurita <weibu@redadmin.org>
>> ---
>>  drivers/staging/rtl8723bs/hal/rtl8723bs_xmit.c | 2 +-
>>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>> 
>> diff --git a/drivers/staging/rtl8723bs/hal/rtl8723bs_xmit.c 
>> b/drivers/staging/rtl8723bs/hal/rtl8723bs_xmit.c
>> index 842e19b53421..7ba8981f4652 100644
>> --- a/drivers/staging/rtl8723bs/hal/rtl8723bs_xmit.c
>> +++ b/drivers/staging/rtl8723bs/hal/rtl8723bs_xmit.c
>> @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ static s32 rtl8723_dequeue_writeport(struct adapter 
>> *padapter)
>>  	/*  check if hardware tx fifo page is enough */
>>  	if (!rtw_hal_sdio_query_tx_freepage(pri_padapter, PageIdx, 
>> pxmitbuf->pg_num)) {
>>  		if (!bUpdatePageNum) {
>> -			/*  Total number of page is NOT available, so update current FIFO 
>> status */
>> +			/*  Total number of pages is NOT available, so update current FIFO 
>> status */
> 
> As "pages" is now plural, shouldn't "is" become "are"?
> 
> Also, you can drop the extra leading space in the comment.
> 
> thanks,
> 
> greg "english grammer is rough" k-h

  reply	other threads:[~2025-09-17  6:23 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2025-09-17  5:39 [PATCH] staging: rtl8723bs: xmit: fix grammar in comment Akiyoshi Kurita
2025-09-17  5:52 ` Greg KH
2025-09-17  6:23   ` weibu [this message]
2025-09-17  6:37 ` [PATCH v2] staging: rtl8723bs: xmit: rephrase comment and drop extra space Akiyoshi Kurita

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