linux-trace-devel.vger.kernel.org archive mirror
 help / color / mirror / Atom feed
From: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@kernel.org>
To: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: linux-trace-devel@vger.kernel.org, lkml@vger.kernel.org,
	Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@kernel.org>,
	John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] rtla: Minor grammar fix for rtla README
Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2022 15:36:30 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <d44df964e89e620fa5676c65333365778b15d42f.1650029027.git.bristot@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <cover.1650029027.git.bristot@kernel.org>

From: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>

- Change to "The rtla meta-tool includes"
- Remove an unnecessary "But, "
- Adjust the formatting of the paragraph resulting from the changes.
- Simplify the wording for the libraries and tools.

Link: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20220408161012.10544-1-jkacur@redhat.com/

Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@goodmis.org>
Cc: Daniel Bristot de Oliveria <bristot@kernel.org>
Fixes: 79ce8f43ac5a ("rtla: Real-Time Linux Analysis tool")
Acked-by: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@kernel.org>
Signed-off-by: John Kacur <jkacur@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@kernel.org>
---
 tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 12 +++++-------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
index 6c88446f7e74..0fbad2640b8c 100644
--- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
+++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
@@ -1,15 +1,13 @@
 RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
 
-The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
-aims to analyze the real-time properties of Linux. But, instead of
-testing Linux as a black box, rtla leverages kernel tracing
-capabilities to provide precise information about the properties
-and root causes of unexpected results.
+The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands that aims to analyze
+the real-time properties of Linux. Instead of testing Linux as a black box,
+rtla leverages kernel tracing capabilities to provide precise information
+about the properties and root causes of unexpected results.
 
 Installing RTLA
 
-RTLA depends on some libraries and tools. More precisely, it depends on the
-following libraries:
+RTLA depends on the following libraries and tools:
 
  - libtracefs
  - libtraceevent
-- 
2.35.1

  parent reply	other threads:[~2022-04-15 13:37 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-04-15 13:36 [PATCH 0/3] rtla: v5.18-rc2 Fixes Daniel Bristot de Oliveira
2022-04-15 13:36 ` [PATCH 1/3] rtla: Avoid record NULL pointer dereference Daniel Bristot de Oliveira
2022-04-15 13:36 ` [PATCH 2/3] rtla: Don't overwrite existing directory mode Daniel Bristot de Oliveira
2022-04-15 13:36 ` Daniel Bristot de Oliveira [this message]
2022-04-19 16:23 ` [PATCH 0/3] rtla: v5.18-rc2 Fixes Daniel Bristot de Oliveira

Reply instructions:

You may reply publicly to this message via plain-text email
using any one of the following methods:

* Save the following mbox file, import it into your mail client,
  and reply-to-all from there: mbox

  Avoid top-posting and favor interleaved quoting:
  https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Posting_style#Interleaved_style

* Reply using the --to, --cc, and --in-reply-to
  switches of git-send-email(1):

  git send-email \
    --in-reply-to=d44df964e89e620fa5676c65333365778b15d42f.1650029027.git.bristot@kernel.org \
    --to=bristot@kernel.org \
    --cc=jkacur@redhat.com \
    --cc=linux-trace-devel@vger.kernel.org \
    --cc=lkml@vger.kernel.org \
    --cc=rostedt@goodmis.org \
    /path/to/YOUR_REPLY

  https://kernel.org/pub/software/scm/git/docs/git-send-email.html

* If your mail client supports setting the In-Reply-To header
  via mailto: links, try the mailto: link
Be sure your reply has a Subject: header at the top and a blank line before the message body.
This is a public inbox, see mirroring instructions
for how to clone and mirror all data and code used for this inbox;
as well as URLs for NNTP newsgroup(s).