From: "M. Vefa Bicakci" <m.v.b@runbox.com>
To: Larry Finger <Larry.Finger@lwfinger.net>, Joe Perches <joe@perches.com>
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-wireless@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 14/16] staging: rtl8723au: Improve readability of two very long lines
Date: Sat, 14 Mar 2015 16:16:34 -0400 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <55049722.9090702@runbox.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1426263881.11459.17.camel@perches.com>
On 13/03/15 12:24 PM, Joe Perches wrote:
> On Fri, 2015-03-13 at 10:44 -0500, Larry Finger wrote:
>> On 03/12/2015 10:15 PM, M. Vefa Bicakci wrote:
>>> Improve the readability of an if statement and its very long trace
>>> output line in rtl8723au's rtw_security.c.
> []
>>> diff --git a/drivers/staging/rtl8723au/core/rtw_security.c b/drivers/staging/rtl8723au/core/rtw_security.c
> []
>>> @@ -759,9 +759,21 @@ int rtw_tkip_decrypt23a(struct rtw_adapter *padapter,
>>>
>>> *((u32 *)crc) = le32_to_cpu(getcrc32(payload, length-4));
>>>
>>> - if (crc[3] != payload[length - 1] || crc[2] != payload[length - 2] || crc[1] != payload[length - 3] || crc[0] != payload[length - 4]) {
>>> - RT_TRACE(_module_rtl871x_security_c_, _drv_err_, ("rtw_wep_decrypt23a:icv error crc[3](%x)!= payload[length-1](%x) || crc[2](%x)!= payload[length-2](%x) || crc[1](%x)!= payload[length-3](%x) || crc[0](%x)!= payload[length-4](%x)\n",
>>> - crc[3], payload[length - 1], crc[2], payload[length - 2], crc[1], payload[length - 3], crc[0], payload[length - 4]));
>>> + if (crc[3] != payload[length - 1] ||
>>> + crc[2] != payload[length - 2] ||
>>> + crc[1] != payload[length - 3] ||
>>> + crc[0] != payload[length - 4]) {
>>
>> The continuation lines should be lined up with the opening paren. This should be
>>
>> if (crc[3] != payload[length - 1] ||
>> crc[2] != payload[length - 2] ||
>> crc[1] != payload[length - 3] ||
>> crc[0] != payload[length - 4]) {
>
> Maybe:
> if (memcmp(&crc, &payload[length - 4], 4)) {
> RT_TRACE(etc, "%08x vs %4phN",
> crc, &payload[length - 4])
Hello Larry and Joe,
Thank you for the reviews!
I have addressed your comments in my local repository, and I hope to send out
the second version of the commits for review by tomorrow.
Vefa
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2015-03-14 20:16 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 24+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2015-03-13 3:15 [PATCH 00/16] checkpatch clean-up of rtl8723au's rtw_security.c M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 01/16] staging: rtl8723au: Reformat whitespace to increase readability M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 4:53 ` Sudip Mukherjee
2015-03-13 11:16 ` M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 02/16] staging: rtl8723au: Fix "before/around/after" whitespace issues M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 03/16] staging: rtl8723au: else should follow close brace M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 04/16] staging: rtl8723au: Fix the indentation of two lines M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 05/16] staging: rtl8723au: Reorganize a few functions to remove indentation M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 06/16] staging: rtl8723au: Do not initialize a static to 0 M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 07/16] staging: rtl8723au: else is not generally useful after a return M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 08/16] staging: rtl8723au: Remove unneeded curly braces M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 09/16] staging: rtl8723au: trailing statements should be on next line M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 10/16] staging: rtl8723au: that open brace should be on the previous line M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 11/16] staging: rtl8723au: No spaces at the start of a line M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 12/16] staging: rtl8723au: Adjust whitespace in and around comments M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 13/16] staging: rtl8723au: suspect code indent for conditional statements M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 14/16] staging: rtl8723au: Improve readability of two very long lines M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 15:44 ` Larry Finger
2015-03-13 16:24 ` Joe Perches
2015-03-14 20:16 ` M. Vefa Bicakci [this message]
2015-03-14 21:55 ` Joe Perches
2015-03-15 0:17 ` M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 15/16] staging: rtl8723au: Correct a typo in a trace log line M. Vefa Bicakci
2015-03-13 3:15 ` [PATCH 16/16] staging: rtl8723au: Remove unneeded comments M. Vefa Bicakci
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