From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=infradead.org header.i=@infradead.org header.b="C0ZRrpJq" Received: from bombadil.infradead.org (bombadil.infradead.org [IPv6:2607:7c80:54:3::133]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 45B2C1B5; Tue, 28 Nov 2023 08:18:45 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=infradead.org; s=bombadil.20210309; h=Content-Transfer-Encoding: Content-Type:In-Reply-To:From:References:Cc:To:Subject:MIME-Version:Date: Message-ID:Sender:Reply-To:Content-ID:Content-Description; bh=V1WnKx0mNAa03IEWmc37OFz377UE9cZb+Km5Xefp1Ig=; b=C0ZRrpJq0LDHq8RIXd2ExZ4sXy O4mtpphrw9MK6ViAUZRvrozzydvNCAmGRiumtJyRQNviWjfkPMwyQQfakMUA38LhkgB/UxZqnImF3 io4KzM/7/83HA1vaVEttoBiBf493QjtIpP4xpe93W9zDwDpur+G9lczCYuy56CEZZQ4PawPtwngWt L+nBUP0Y5Q4a+J0O/2v1bfRfljRxCcEMKGfeWL6fH0XQKDCQ6WDVKKVLCMGHaXL8Fcx64O8LrlTQo faaxFY8sxQ1040mnwdteL++9kk0t1EjmCLgvPp2OcBlgZloMvzt2nbGOttTVeCXKNjnDpj4ZWN0HK hXzye7AA==; Received: from [50.53.46.231] (helo=[192.168.254.15]) by bombadil.infradead.org with esmtpsa (Exim 4.96 #2 (Red Hat Linux)) id 1r80nH-005nLP-2m; Tue, 28 Nov 2023 16:18:39 +0000 Message-ID: <0e7941d8-d9b2-4253-9ad5-0f7806e45e2e@infradead.org> Date: Tue, 28 Nov 2023 08:18:37 -0800 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: live-patching@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: [PATCH] Took care of some grammatical mistakes Content-Language: en-US To: Matthew Wilcox Cc: attreyee-muk , jpoimboe@kernel.org, jikos@kernel.org, mbenes@suse.cz, pmladek@suse.com, joe.lawrence@redhat.com, corbet@lwn.net, live-patching@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org References: <20231127155758.33070-1-tintinm2017@gmail.com> <202dbdf5-1adf-4ffa-a50d-0424967286ba@infradead.org> From: Randy Dunlap In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On 11/28/23 06:12, Matthew Wilcox wrote: > On Mon, Nov 27, 2023 at 11:41:31AM -0800, Randy Dunlap wrote: >> Hi, >> >> On 11/27/23 07:57, attreyee-muk wrote: >>> Respected Maintainers, >>> >>> I have made some grammatical changes in the livepatch.rst file where I >>> felt that the sentence would have sounded more correct and would have become easy for >>> beginners to understand by reading. >>> Requesting review of my proposed changes from the mainatiners. >>> >>> Thank You >>> Attreyee Mukherjee >>> >>> Signed-off-by: attreyee-muk >>> --- >>> Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst | 8 ++++---- >>> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) >>> >>> diff --git a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst b/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst >>> index 68e3651e8af9..a2d2317b7d6b 100644 >>> --- a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst >>> +++ b/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst >>> @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ and livepatching: >>> >>> All three approaches need to modify the existing code at runtime. Therefore >>> -they need to be aware of each other and not step over each other's toes. >>> +they need to be aware of each other and not step over each others' toes. >> >> I've never seen that written like that, so I disagree here. FWIW. > > "Step over" is new to me too. I see "step on" much more often. Agreed. > As far as placement of the apostrophe, > https://ludwig.guru/s/step+on+each+others+toes > suggests either omitting the apostrophe or placing it after the s, > as attreyee-muk has done is most common. Apparently you can find anything on the internet. :) Here's the other side: https://jakubmarian.com/each-others-vs-each-others-in-english/ -- ~Randy