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Wed, 29 Nov 2023 04:47:23 -0800 (PST) Received: by archie.me (Postfix, from userid 1000) id F1C4B10205C79; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 19:47:19 +0700 (WIB) Date: Wed, 29 Nov 2023 19:47:19 +0700 From: Bagas Sanjaya To: Miroslav Benes , Randy Dunlap Cc: Matthew Wilcox , attreyee-muk , jpoimboe@kernel.org, jikos@kernel.org, pmladek@suse.com, joe.lawrence@redhat.com, corbet@lwn.net, live-patching@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Took care of some grammatical mistakes Message-ID: References: <20231127155758.33070-1-tintinm2017@gmail.com> <202dbdf5-1adf-4ffa-a50d-0424967286ba@infradead.org> <0e7941d8-d9b2-4253-9ad5-0f7806e45e2e@infradead.org> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: live-patching@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="yTYQjTtA5F/R5Chg" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: --yTYQjTtA5F/R5Chg Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Wed, Nov 29, 2023 at 11:08:46AM +0100, Miroslav Benes wrote: > On Tue, 28 Nov 2023, Randy Dunlap wrote: >=20 > >=20 > >=20 > > On 11/28/23 06:12, Matthew Wilcox wrote: > > > On Mon, Nov 27, 2023 at 11:41:31AM -0800, Randy Dunlap wrote: > > >> Hi, > > >> > > >> On 11/27/23 07:57, attreyee-muk wrote: > > >>> Respected Maintainers,=20 > > >>> > > >>> I have made some grammatical changes in the livepatch.rst file wher= e I > > >>> felt that the sentence would have sounded more correct and would ha= ve become easy for > > >>> beginners to understand by reading.=20 > > >>> Requesting review of my proposed changes from the mainatiners.=20 > > >>> > > >>> Thank You > > >>> Attreyee Mukherjee > > >>> > > >>> Signed-off-by: attreyee-muk > > >>> --- > > >>> Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst | 8 ++++---- > > >>> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > >>> > > >>> diff --git a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst b/Documentation/= livepatch/livepatch.rst > > >>> index 68e3651e8af9..a2d2317b7d6b 100644 > > >>> --- a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst > > >>> +++ b/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst > > >>> @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ and livepatching: > > >>> =20 > > >>> All three approaches need to modify the existing code at runtime. = Therefore > > >>> -they need to be aware of each other and not step over each other's= toes. > > >>> +they need to be aware of each other and not step over each others'= toes. > > >> > > >> I've never seen that written like that, so I disagree here. FWIW. > > >=20 > > > "Step over" is new to me too. I see "step on" much more often. > >=20 > > Agreed. >=20 > Yes. Attreyee, please fix this instead. > =20 > > > As far as placement of the apostrophe, > > > https://ludwig.guru/s/step+on+each+others+toes > > > suggests either omitting the apostrophe or placing it after the s, > > > as attreyee-muk has done is most common. > >=20 > > Apparently you can find anything on the internet. :) > >=20 > > Here's the other side: > >=20 > > https://jakubmarian.com/each-others-vs-each-others-in-english/ >=20 > I am not a native speaker, but "step on each other's toe" sounds the best= =20 > to me. Or perhaps even "they need to be aware of each other and not step= =20 > on their toes" since it is then kind of implied? English is difficult :). >=20 I agree with yours and Jakub's blogpost, since 'each other' refers to every single individual. 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