From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=redhat.com header.i=@redhat.com header.b="Bp9Ils0f" Received: from us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com (us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com [170.10.129.124]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id DF53C10E0 for ; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:26 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=redhat.com; s=mimecast20190719; t=1701266005; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=fCRlZ8oiqaJTBcB7G2DHmy/vp26Z550XjGVY3C3y2Oo=; b=Bp9Ils0fKZ2EoAPIbvNkEYO+UTkL9GZnYvtvkblh6i2jQZZG9Gqz3chpLjxWdg2DTktc6m T8qSvLoOwChGOhqlNXbwdjYB8D+ehWhrn+994v2dRi8+RGCD2vL57mDxm057XIpUKUckGI l1l9XKeGzGju1uNsk/ahLJnDTOqDFT0= Received: from mail-vs1-f71.google.com (mail-vs1-f71.google.com [209.85.217.71]) by relay.mimecast.com with ESMTP with STARTTLS (version=TLSv1.3, cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id us-mta-157-jMan9-KUNDS8uoJQ05w08w-1; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 08:53:24 -0500 X-MC-Unique: jMan9-KUNDS8uoJQ05w08w-1 Received: by mail-vs1-f71.google.com with SMTP id ada2fe7eead31-4644ca0a48aso156862137.2 for ; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:24 -0800 (PST) X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20230601; t=1701266004; x=1701870804; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:subject:from:references:cc:to :content-language:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=fCRlZ8oiqaJTBcB7G2DHmy/vp26Z550XjGVY3C3y2Oo=; b=wIelomNJkPnu3fej6EvbWGx+sIvI7xMwVH5GtoAJpJULnHfkgg/0D4mMe4n0Z+SFlv q9B3Tg4D/QxDYCfyAJcKi1c5Eg/LwugcX/XSA7TN0vGK/6Shq9/HEjNJh5WfiBc1L/MC gzpcsLBdnhA37PSnzon+8rXh5FpPo7krAZvp1MjBn9GKb5N5s0UmmE6g8lLBv6LsRM4z dkbZajhlaeBaRtTSeBOssKO5yN8aIwD5WOEEzl2X2CF+z8hyh5uDIFekEghH9CHbVc8v 4zCOgGIMIGqMDlT++ZKPf83yNWvqmNQb7+/jc+8dlpK5ZLeFS/GUYppwvz3mzmIIrx4l mPpw== X-Gm-Message-State: AOJu0YzL/XF3jpuvQHmgZTMdH6C2bP4fdrzsDDixyuFS9djUlT+KsUX/ yQ/7+L6AqRBpzhuH/UGxrFX524gj3bk7SRbsr+HcNPvgcEqw19uY0dVJRiwfOccfaf5fQZXvaRE 5NhaL+nTXNvGds1ooxUDHA85DJA== X-Received: by 2002:a05:6102:34d1:b0:464:4f99:67cd with SMTP id a17-20020a05610234d100b004644f9967cdmr898018vst.25.1701266003954; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:23 -0800 (PST) X-Google-Smtp-Source: AGHT+IG6XeoX3LySftJvfhNd92B8TROaD2k49rLLui+JpiO50N4F9wBA4UISs6o9ymk2BLyZlpB5+Q== X-Received: by 2002:a05:6102:34d1:b0:464:4f99:67cd with SMTP id a17-20020a05610234d100b004644f9967cdmr897999vst.25.1701266003740; Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:23 -0800 (PST) Received: from [192.168.1.9] (pool-68-160-135-240.bstnma.fios.verizon.net. [68.160.135.240]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id s7-20020a0cf647000000b0067a4396f9cdsm3018175qvm.8.2023.11.29.05.53.22 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Wed, 29 Nov 2023 05:53:23 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: Date: Wed, 29 Nov 2023 08:53:22 -0500 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: live-patching@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:102.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/102.15.1 Content-Language: en-US To: Bagas Sanjaya , Linux Kernel Mailing List , Linux Documentation , Linux Kernel Livepatching Cc: Josh Poimboeuf , Jiri Kosina , Miroslav Benes , Petr Mladek , Jonathan Corbet , Attreyee Mukherjee References: <20231129132527.8078-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> From: Joe Lawrence Subject: Re: [PATCH 0/2] Minor grammatical fixup for livepatch docs In-Reply-To: <20231129132527.8078-1-bagasdotme@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit On 11/29/23 08:25, Bagas Sanjaya wrote: > I was prompted to write this little grammar fix series when reading > the fix from Attreyee [1], with review comments requesting changes > to that fix. So here's my version of the fix, with reviews from [1] > addressed (and distinct grammar fixes splitted). > Typical kernel workflow would be for Attreyee to incorporate feedback and post their v2 after a day or two. From the format they posted, it appears to be a first(ish) kernel contribution post. Let's be kind and patient so they we all may benefit from the practice of iterating on their patch. -- Joe