[PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Rolf Eike Beer]

Trivial typo fix.

Signed-off-by: Rolf Eike Beer <eike-kernel@sf-tec.de>

--- linux-2.6.0-test9/Documentation/eisa.txt	2003-10-25 20:43:59.000000000 +0200
+++ linux-2.6.0-test9-eike/Documentation/eisa.txt	2003-11-12 09:29:47.000000000 +0100
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
 virtual_root.force_probe :
 
 Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
-EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
+EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Default to 0
 (don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
 CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
 

Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Jean Delvare]

Hi Eike,

> Trivial typo fix.
> (...)
>  Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
> -EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
> +EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Default to 0
>  (don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
>  CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.

Wouldn't it rather be "Defaults"?

-- 
Jean Delvare

Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Rolf Eike Beer]

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Jean Delvare wrote:
> Hi Eike,
>
> > Trivial typo fix.
> > (...)
> >  Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
> > -EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
> > +EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Default to 0
> >  (don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
> >  CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
>
> Wouldn't it rather be "Defaults"?

Damn, yes. Every time I read it again I feel a little bit more comfortable 
with s/are set/is set/. Am I right or is it already too late for useful 
work?

Eike

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Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Randy.Dunlap]

Rolf Eike Beer wrote:
> Jean Delvare wrote:
> 
>>Hi Eike,
>>
>>
>>>Trivial typo fix.
>>>(...)
>>> Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
>>>-EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
>>>+EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Default to 0
>>> (don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
>>> CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
>>
>>Wouldn't it rather be "Defaults"?
> 
> 
> Damn, yes. Every time I read it again I feel a little bit more comfortable 
> with s/are set/is set/. Am I right or is it already too late for useful 
> work?

Defaults

when either FOO or BAR is set.

and the comma after (don't force) shouldn't be there...

-- 
~Randy

Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Rolf Eike Beer]

Typo fixes.

Thanks to Randy Dunlap and Jean Delvare.

Signed-off-by: Rolf Eike Beer <eike-kernel@sf-tec.de>

--- linux-2.6.11/Documentation/eisa.txt	2005-03-02 08:38:12.000000000 +0100
+++ linux-2.6.12-rc1/Documentation/eisa.txt	2005-03-27 21:58:04.000000000 +0200
@@ -171,9 +171,9 @@
 virtual_root.force_probe :
 
 Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
-EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
-(don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
-CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
+EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaults to 0
+(don't force) and set to 1 (force probing) when either
+CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING is set.
 
 ** Random notes :
 

Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[Jean Delvare]

> > >  Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
> > > -EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
> > > +EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Default to 0
> > >  (don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
> > >  CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
> >
> > Wouldn't it rather be "Defaults"?
> 
> Damn, yes. Every time I read it again I feel a little bit more
> comfortable with s/are set/is set/. Am I right or is it already too
> late for useful work?

"is" is better, even if both are commonly used in this case. And no,
it's not to late.

-- 
Jean Delvare

Re: [PATCH] typo fix in Documentation/eisa.txt

[L. A. Walsh]

Rolf Eike Beer wrote:

>Typo fixes.
>
>Thanks to Randy Dunlap and Jean Delvare.
>
>Signed-off-by: Rolf Eike Beer <eike-kernel@sf-tec.de>
>
>--- linux-2.6.11/Documentation/eisa.txt	2005-03-02 08:38:12.000000000 +0100
>+++ linux-2.6.12-rc1/Documentation/eisa.txt	2005-03-27 21:58:04.000000000 +0200
>@@ -171,9 +171,9 @@
> virtual_root.force_probe :
> 
> Force the probing code to probe EISA slots even when it cannot find an
>-EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaultd to 0
>-(don't force), and set to 1 (force probing) when either
>-CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING are set.
>+EISA compliant mainboard (nothing appears on slot 0). Defaults to 0
>+(don't force) and set to 1 (force probing) when either
>+CONFIG_ALPHA_JENSEN or CONFIG_EISA_VLB_PRIMING is set.
>
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    My expertise is limited by a fuzzy memory, and I know it's bad form to
comment much on english usage or spelling as they are often tangential to
the issue at hand, but as long as we are on the topic, I think you had it
right the first time.

    I believe the comment, properly used the "imperative":
declaring intended usage of the variable, i.e. - "Do this or do
that"; "Default to 0 or set to 1".  To use a perl like example:

                       # set probe action:
probe=0;               # default to 0 (don't force)
probe=1 if (X || Y);   # and set to 1 (force), if either X or Y is set

    If you use "Defaults", then I think that's an implied 3rd person
singular usage and for correct parallelism, the parallel clause (after
the "and") should use the same tense.  Third person tense for "set"
would use "is" as a passive-voice auxiliary: "[it] is set to 1..."

    Saying "default to 0" is like the perlism:
    setup values of v:

    v=0;               # default to 0
    v=1 if (X || Y);   # and set to 1 if X or Y is set
 
    I can't believe we are discussing grammer concerns in comments in
the linux-kenel.  :-) (!).

-linda