Re: [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview

Jonathan Corbet
2015-02-06T18:23:21Z

On Fri, 6 Feb 2015 18:17:52 +0000
Luis de Bethencourt <luis@debethencourt.com> wrote:

> -video streams. Besides usually several of such audio and video streams
> -it also contains data streams with information about the programs
> +video streams. As well as several of such audio and video streams, it
> +usually also contains data streams with information about the programs

Not sure if I see this as an improvement or not; you've changed the
meaning of the sentence a bit. It also lacks changelog and signoff...

Thanks,

jon