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From: Josh Triplett <josh@joshtriplett.org>
To: "Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
Cc: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, mingo@kernel.org,
	jiangshanlai@gmail.com, dipankar@in.ibm.com,
	akpm@linux-foundation.org, mathieu.desnoyers@efficios.com,
	tglx@linutronix.de, peterz@infradead.org, rostedt@goodmis.org,
	dhowells@redhat.com, edumazet@google.com, dvhart@linux.intel.com,
	fweisbec@gmail.com, oleg@redhat.com, bobby.prani@gmail.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH tip/core/rcu 1/8] documentation: Record RCU requirements
Date: Fri, 4 Dec 2015 16:34:43 -0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20151205003443.GC26663@cloud> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1449273026-23633-1-git-send-email-paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>

The content of the document seems fine; a few comments below on
meta-issues.

On Fri, Dec 04, 2015 at 03:50:19PM -0800, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/RCU/Design/Requirements/Requirements.html
> @@ -0,0 +1,2799 @@
> +<!-- DO NOT HAND EDIT. -->
> +<!-- Instead, edit Requirements.htmlx and run 'sh htmlqqz.sh Requirements' -->
> +<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"
> +        "http://www.w3.org/TR/html4/loose.dtd">

Nit: these days, this should just be:
<!doctype html>

> +        <html>
> +        <head><title>A Tour Through RCU's Requirements [LWN.net]</title>
> +        <meta HTTP-EQUIV="Content-Type" CONTENT="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">

Is there a good reason to not use charset=utf-8 here?

> +
> +<h1>A Tour Through RCU's Requirements</h1>
> +
> +<p>Copyright IBM Corporation, 2015</p>

If you're aiming for a properly formatted copyright notice, the year
typically comes first, followed by the copyright holder.  That said,
your corporate guidelines presumably have a specific format; is this
that format?

> +<p>Author: Paul E.&nbsp;McKenney</p>
> +<p><i>The initial version of this document appeared in the
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/">LWN</a> articles
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/652156/">here</a>,
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/652677/">here</a>, and
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/653326/">here</a>.</i></p>

s/http/https/g

> +<p>
> +All that aside, here are the categories of currently known RCU requirements:
> +</p>
> +
> +<ol>
> +<li>	<a href="#Fundamental Requirements">

Anchors don't typically have spaces in them.  This may work in some
browsers, but it doesn't validate.  You should either use %20 or
(better) use a '-'.

> +<p>
> +This is followed by a <a href="#Summary">summary</a>,
> +which is in turn followed by the inevitable
> +<a href="#Answers to Quick Quizzes">answers to the quick quizzes</a>.

(Note: when editing anchors, don't forget to handle the target of this
in the generation script.)

> +<p>
> +This scenario resembles one of the first uses of RCU in
> +<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DYNIX">DYNIX/ptx</a>,

s/http/https/

> +<p>
> +However, this temptation must be resisted because there are a
> +surprisingly large number of ways that the compiler
> +(to say nothing of
> +<a href="http://www.openvms.compaq.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html">DEC Alpha CPUs</a>)

This link sadly doesn't seem to work anymore; it redirects to HP's
general page on OpenVMS, not a copy of that specific article.o
Use this instead, assuming no current live version exists:
https://web.archive.org/web/20120720095054/http://www.openvms.compaq.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html

> +<li>	It is also easy to forget to use <tt>rcu_assign_pointer()</tt>
> +	and <tt>rcu_dereference()</tt>, perhaps (incorrectly)
> +	substituting a simple assignment.
> +	To catch this sort of error, a given RCU-protected pointer may be
> +	tagged with <tt>__rcu</tt>, after which running sparse
> +	with <tt>CONFIG_SPARSE_RCU_POINTER=y</tt> will complain
> +	about simple-assignment accesses to that pointer.
> +	Arnd Bergmann made me aware of this requirement, and also
> +	supplied the needed
> +	<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/376011/">patch series</a>.

s/http/https/

> +<li>	Open-coded use of <tt>rcu_assign_pointer()</tt> and
> +	<tt>rcu_dereference()</tt> to create typical linked
> +	data structures can be surprisingly error-prone.
> +	Therefore, RCU-protected
> +	<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/609973/#RCU List APIs">linked lists</a>

s/http/https/

> +<p>
> +This all should be quite obvious, but the fact remains that
> +Linus Torvalds recently had to
> +<a href="http://marc.info/?l=linux-kernel&amp;m=142905739823385">remind</a>
> +me of this requirement.

I'd suggest using the lkml.kernel.org redirector for this link, along
with a Message-Id.

> +<p>
> +The name notwithstanding, some Linux-kernel architectures
> +can have nested NMIs, which RCU must handle correctly.
> +Andy Lutomirski
> +<a href="https://lkml.org/lkml/2014/11/21/642">surprised me</a>
> +with this requirement;
> +he also kindly surprised me with
> +<a href="https://lkml.org/lkml/2014/11/22/1">an algorithm</a>
> +that meets this requirement.

These links should both use lkml.kernel.org as well.  Doubly important
because lkml.org is often down or has broken messages in its archive.

> +<p>
> +RCU therefore provides
> +<tt><a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/217484/">rcu_barrier()</a></tt>,

s/http/https/

> +<p>
> +This pair of mutual scheduler-RCU requirements came as a
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/453002/">complete surprise</a>.

s/http/https/

> +This requirement made its presence known after users made it
> +clear that an earlier
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/107930/">real-time patch</a>

s/http/https/

> +did not meet their needs, in conjunction with some
> +<a href="https://lkml.org/lkml/2005/3/17/199">RCU issues</a>

lkml.kernel.org

> +<p>
> +The
> +<a href="http://lwn.net/Articles/609973/#RCU Per-Flavor API Table">RCU-bh API</a>

s/http/https/ (and the same for all later lwn links in the document)

- Josh Triplett

  parent reply	other threads:[~2015-12-05  0:34 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2015-12-04 23:49 [PATCH tip/core/rcu 0/8] Documentation updates for 4.5 Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 1/8] documentation: Record RCU requirements Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05  0:07   ` Josh Triplett
2015-12-05  0:33     ` Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05  0:38       ` Josh Triplett
2015-12-05  1:56         ` Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05 21:19           ` Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05  0:34   ` Josh Triplett [this message]
2015-12-05  1:54     ` Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05 20:19       ` Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 2/8] Documentation: Record bottom-bit-zero guarantee for ->next Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 3/8] documentation: Cover requirements controlling stall warnings Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 4/8] documentation: Composability analogies Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 5/8] documentation: Expand on scheduler/RCU deadlock requirements Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 6/8] documentation: Clarify RCU memory barriers and requirements Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 7/8] documentation: Update RCU requirements based on expedited changes Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-04 23:50 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 8/8] Documentation/memory-barriers.txt: Fix ACCESS_ONCE thinko Paul E. McKenney
2015-12-05  0:42 ` [PATCH tip/core/rcu 0/8] Documentation updates for 4.5 Josh Triplett

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