* [PATCH] tools/memory-model: Fix a couple of typos
@ 2018-08-12 5:29 SeongJae Park
2018-08-12 23:36 ` Paul E. McKenney
0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: SeongJae Park @ 2018-08-12 5:29 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: paulmck; +Cc: linux-kernel, SeongJae Park
This commit fixes a couple of typos in README and recipies.txt.
Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
---
tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt | 2 +-
tools/memory-model/README | 2 +-
2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt b/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
index a40802fa1099..29df496c1c77 100644
--- a/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
+++ b/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ The smp_wmb() macro orders prior stores against later stores, and the
smp_rmb() macro orders prior loads against later loads. Therefore, if
the final value of r0 is 1, the final value of r1 must also be 1.
-The the xlog_state_switch_iclogs() function in fs/xfs/xfs_log.c contains
+The xlog_state_switch_iclogs() function in fs/xfs/xfs_log.c contains
the following write-side code fragment:
log->l_curr_block -= log->l_logBBsize;
diff --git a/tools/memory-model/README b/tools/memory-model/README
index ee987ce20aae..73313faf4036 100644
--- a/tools/memory-model/README
+++ b/tools/memory-model/README
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ The corresponding output includes:
Observation SB+fencembonceonces Never 0 2000000
Time SB+fencembonceonces 0.16
-The "Positive: 0 Negative: 2000000" and the "Never 0 2000000" indicate
+The "Positive: 0, Negative: 2000000" and the "Never 0 2000000" indicate
that during two million trials, the state specified in this litmus
test's "exists" clause was not reached.
--
2.13.0
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* Re: [PATCH] tools/memory-model: Fix a couple of typos
2018-08-12 5:29 [PATCH] tools/memory-model: Fix a couple of typos SeongJae Park
@ 2018-08-12 23:36 ` Paul E. McKenney
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From: Paul E. McKenney @ 2018-08-12 23:36 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: SeongJae Park; +Cc: linux-kernel
On Sun, Aug 12, 2018 at 02:29:28PM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote:
> This commit fixes a couple of typos in README and recipies.txt.
>
> Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
Good catch on the first "The the"! (Why say it once when you can say
it twice?)
On the second, the quoted output doesn't have a comma, so the quote of
that output also needs not to have a comma. So I applied the first
patch and left out the second. But please let me know if I am missing
something.
Thanx, Paul
> ---
> tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt | 2 +-
> tools/memory-model/README | 2 +-
> 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt b/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
> index a40802fa1099..29df496c1c77 100644
> --- a/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
> +++ b/tools/memory-model/Documentation/recipes.txt
> @@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ The smp_wmb() macro orders prior stores against later stores, and the
> smp_rmb() macro orders prior loads against later loads. Therefore, if
> the final value of r0 is 1, the final value of r1 must also be 1.
>
> -The the xlog_state_switch_iclogs() function in fs/xfs/xfs_log.c contains
> +The xlog_state_switch_iclogs() function in fs/xfs/xfs_log.c contains
> the following write-side code fragment:
>
> log->l_curr_block -= log->l_logBBsize;
> diff --git a/tools/memory-model/README b/tools/memory-model/README
> index ee987ce20aae..73313faf4036 100644
> --- a/tools/memory-model/README
> +++ b/tools/memory-model/README
> @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ The corresponding output includes:
> Observation SB+fencembonceonces Never 0 2000000
> Time SB+fencembonceonces 0.16
>
> -The "Positive: 0 Negative: 2000000" and the "Never 0 2000000" indicate
> +The "Positive: 0, Negative: 2000000" and the "Never 0 2000000" indicate
> that during two million trials, the state specified in this litmus
> test's "exists" clause was not reached.
>
> --
> 2.13.0
>
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