From: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
To: Brendan Jackman <jackmanb@google.com>
Cc: bpf@vger.kernel.org, Alexei Starovoitov <ast@kernel.org>,
Daniel Borkmann <daniel@iogearbox.net>,
Andrii Nakryiko <andrii.nakryiko@gmail.com>,
KP Singh <kpsingh@chromium.org>,
Florent Revest <revest@chromium.org>,
Lukas Bulwahn <lukas.bulwahn@gmail.com>,
linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH bpf-next] docs: bpf: Fixup atomics documentation
Date: Mon, 18 Jan 2021 08:33:06 -0700 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20210118083306.4c16153d@lwn.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20210118113643.232579-1-jackmanb@google.com>
On Mon, 18 Jan 2021 11:36:43 +0000
Brendan Jackman <jackmanb@google.com> wrote:
> This fixues up the markup to fix a warning, be more consistent with
> use of monospace, and use the correct .rst syntax for <em> (* instead
> of _). It also clarifies the explanation of Clang's -mcpu
> requirements for this feature, Alexei pointed out that use of the
> word "version" was confusing here.
This starts to sound like material for more than one patch...?
> NB this conflicts with Lukas' patch at [1], here where I've added
> `::` to fix the warning, I also kept the original ':' which appears
> in the output text.
And why did you do that?
> [1] https://lore.kernel.org/bpf/CA+i-1C3cEXqxcXfD4sibQfx+dtmmzvOzruhk8J5pAw3g5v=KgA@mail.gmail.com/T/#t
>
> Signed-off-by: Brendan Jackman <jackmanb@google.com>
> ---
> Documentation/networking/filter.rst | 30 +++++++++++++++--------------
> 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/filter.rst b/Documentation/networking/filter.rst
> index f6d8f90e9a56..ba03e90a9163 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/filter.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/filter.rst
> @@ -1048,12 +1048,12 @@ Unlike classic BPF instruction set, eBPF has generic load/store operations::
> Where size is one of: BPF_B or BPF_H or BPF_W or BPF_DW.
>
> It also includes atomic operations, which use the immediate field for extra
> -encoding.
> +encoding: ::
Things like this read really strangely. Just say "encoding::" and be done
with it, please.
Thanks,
jon
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Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-01-18 11:36 [PATCH bpf-next] docs: bpf: Fixup atomics documentation Brendan Jackman
2021-01-18 15:33 ` Jonathan Corbet [this message]
2021-01-18 15:43 ` Brendan Jackman
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