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From: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com>
To: davem@davemloft.net, edumazet@google.com, kuba@kernel.org,
	pabeni@redhat.com, horms@kernel.org, corbet@lwn.net
Cc: netdev@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
	Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com>
Subject: Slight improvement in readability
Date: Fri, 22 Nov 2024 04:16:04 +0530	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20241121224604.12071-1-puthen1977@gmail.com> (raw)

Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"

Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
+++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
 
   Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines?
   It's probably the former.  If you find yourself craving more bandwidth,
-  and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
+  and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
   together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your
-  bandwidth.  All without having to have a special black box on either
+  bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either
   side.
 
 
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
   the load across two or more Cirrus chips.
 
   The good news is that one gets nearly the full advantage of the
-  second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth.  (The bad news is
+  second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth. (The bad news is
   that the connection establishment seemed fragile for the higher
   speeds.  Once established, the connection seemed robust enough.)
 
-- 
2.43.0


             reply	other threads:[~2024-11-21 22:46 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-11-21 22:46 Vyshnav Ajith [this message]
2024-11-21 22:55 ` Slight improvement in readability Jonathan Corbet
2024-11-21 23:06 ` Matthew Wilcox

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