From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S1752305Ab2GZO5J (ORCPT ); Thu, 26 Jul 2012 10:57:09 -0400 Received: from mail1.matrix-vision.com ([78.47.19.71]:39696 "EHLO mail1.matrix-vision.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1751872Ab2GZO5H (ORCPT ); Thu, 26 Jul 2012 10:57:07 -0400 Message-ID: <50115B72.2070604@matrix-vision.de> Date: Thu, 26 Jul 2012 17:00:02 +0200 From: Michael Jones User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux i686; rv:14.0) Gecko/20120714 Thunderbird/14.0 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Mark Brown CC: Liam Girdwood , linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] regulator: grammar fix in Kconfig References: <1343311644-19739-1-git-send-email-michael.jones@matrix-vision.de> <1343311644-19739-3-git-send-email-michael.jones@matrix-vision.de> <20120726144812.GN3099@opensource.wolfsonmicro.com> In-Reply-To: <20120726144812.GN3099@opensource.wolfsonmicro.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-MV-Disclaimer: true (erinome) X-AV-Checked: ClamAV using ClamSMTP (erinome) X-AV-Checked: ClamAV using ClamSMTP (mail1) Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 07/26/2012 04:48 PM, Mark Brown wrote: > On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 04:07:24PM +0200, Michael Jones wrote: > >> - constraints then the regulator core will provide an always >> - enabled dummy regulator will be provided, allowing consumer >> - drivers to continue. >> + constraints, the regulator core will provide an always- >> + enabled dummy regulator, allowing consumer drivers to continue. > > This appears to be making the grammar worse, it's just removing a "then" > and inserting, random commas which don't make, much sense. > What I was trying to fix was the double "provide" in "will provide an... will be provided." I agree that the if...then... was ugly, too. MATRIX VISION GmbH, Talstrasse 16, DE-71570 Oppenweiler Registergericht: Amtsgericht Stuttgart, HRB 271090 Geschaeftsfuehrer: Gerhard Thullner, Werner Armingeon, Uwe Furtner, Erhard Meier