Re: [PATCH v8 1/2] Documentation: kdump: remind user of nr_cpus

["\"Zhou, Wenjian/周文剑\"" <zhouwj-fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>]

On 08/18/2016 02:47 PM, Dave Young wrote:
> On 08/17/16 at 07:36pm, Joe Perches wrote:
>> On Thu, 2016-08-18 at 10:31 +0800, Zhou Wenjian wrote:
>>> nr_cpus can help to save memory. So we should remind user of it.
>>
>> trivia:
>>> diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
>> []
>>> @@ -390,9 +390,11 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel:
>>>   * Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user
>>>     mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3".
>>>
>>> -* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
>>> +* We generally don' have to bring up an SMP kernel just to capture the
>>
>> don't or do not
>>
>
> Use do not is better, also need replace 'We' with 'You' to be
> consistent with other part.
>
>

I think it's better to fix it in another patch,
for it doesn't have much relevance to the patch set.
I'll post it alone later.

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Thanks
Zhou