From: Zenghui Yu <zenghui.yu@linux.dev>
To: Pengyu Zhang <zpenya1314@gmail.com>
Cc: alexs@kernel.org, siyanteng@loongson.cn, corbet@lwn.net,
seakeel@gmail.com, si.yanteng@linux.dev,
linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org,
yaxin_wang_uestc@163.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Docs/zh_CN: Translate page_tables.rst to Simplified Chinese
Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2024 16:49:56 +0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <68116566-c075-4f29-9809-8d93b69a933e@linux.dev> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240919133825.15606-1-zpenya1314@gmail.com>
On 2024/9/19 21:38, Pengyu Zhang wrote:
> This patch provides a Simplified Chinese translation of the
> "page_tables.rst" document, aimed at improving accessibility
> for Chinese-speaking developers and users.
>
> The translation prioritizes technical accuracy and readability,
> ensuring that the content remains clear and informative for
> its intended audience.
>
> Signed-off-by: Pengyu Zhang <zpenya1314@gmail.com>
Overall the translation looks good, thanks for your effort! Only two
nits inline...
> +在页粒度为 4KB 且地址范围为32位的情况下，pfn 0 对应地址0x00000000，pfn 1 对应
> +地址0x00001000，pfn 2 对应地址 0x00002000，以此类推，直到 pfn 0xfffff 对应
> +0xfffff000。如果页粒度为 16KB，则 pfn 分别对应地址 0x00004000、0x00008000
> +... 0xffffc000，pfn 的范围从 0 到 0x3fffff。
s/0x3fffff/0x3ffff/
Mind fixing it in the original doc?
> +本文将简化并概述 Linux 内核如何处理这些页面错误、创建表和表项、检查内存是否存在，
> +以及当内存不存在时，如何请求从持久存储或其他设备加载数据，并更新 MMU 及其缓存。
> +
> +前几步取决于设备依赖。大多是架构跳转到 `do_page_fault()`，而 x86 中断处理程序由
^^^^^^^^
I'm afraid this is not a correct translation for "architecture
dependent".
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Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-09-19 13:38 [PATCH v3] Docs/zh_CN: Translate page_tables.rst to Simplified Chinese Pengyu Zhang
2024-09-20 1:40 ` Alex Shi
2024-10-05 8:49 ` Zenghui Yu [this message]
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