From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.0 (2014-02-07) on aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org Received: from vger.kernel.org (vger.kernel.org [23.128.96.18]) by smtp.lore.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 44559C25B08 for ; Sat, 20 Aug 2022 08:03:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S244516AbiHTIDd (ORCPT ); Sat, 20 Aug 2022 04:03:33 -0400 Received: from lindbergh.monkeyblade.net ([23.128.96.19]:58006 "EHLO lindbergh.monkeyblade.net" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S240876AbiHTID2 (ORCPT ); Sat, 20 Aug 2022 04:03:28 -0400 Received: from mail-pl1-x62c.google.com (mail-pl1-x62c.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::62c]) by lindbergh.monkeyblade.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 751A3165BF; Sat, 20 Aug 2022 01:03:26 -0700 (PDT) Received: by mail-pl1-x62c.google.com with SMTP id y4so5878862plb.2; Sat, 20 Aug 2022 01:03:26 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20210112; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :from:to:cc; bh=c/T50bv5wpdPtILZzxvqohnY4keOYpr50uC/TDN3ebQ=; b=B8N7y9blSkxvD3W9s/UNru23tAUCxcONWOPb8rTTj8Q4KhjwmljQKe16UtQM93V2nP TbsZCa6JUHpHCToH5FjpAPugXsk4VBx09oEPuJ+qln5ZYHRkZKVjHzA+0xDocyqyFMJV Cmob1V1dmKYFJaN8Q6V2zGvDo457CkFeHFkq4N5lBT2xKT0b2DOHJWMbSmLw9d8kwCQm VaYzsN3+fzBp38sH63dMQS7fo/fyBNZDIBPqqiuZ+bWx3kzOveNtiJuAzZadDF4lOmAv VUuWuSgB1lwDYX5yFeiP44NhS0vcMobYt7L+Hsu4ZIVBCuk2XP/HR1JVfHpL6ekq2mg8 ClFw== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=content-transfer-encoding:in-reply-to:from:references:to :content-language:subject:user-agent:mime-version:date:message-id :x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc; bh=c/T50bv5wpdPtILZzxvqohnY4keOYpr50uC/TDN3ebQ=; b=SVbwG+/ZmTr67yN47cFS514OeKBjqYr/tluuAVriO/7vP3vPvyPIjSsT9PNlIhjhPW WcV6QiAQNyqCu5PjPozzaWfiScF3bsFELQkZnytCPWMym45eXfiM5d+F8FYXsf+rtB0W 8ptyyLsNTjstpB8Gi0Qb1bA6zxemceI7whXTk3Xp/HJ0WTE+Qy6h7hqSqN8I1XWsU9dr eYExecGxy86ASTObnlmGjdK2WK9+B55NkAxbjL+JtWg3FM9L0wjFNlTCLr5ZVqAPRlRZ V9QC/I593+rrOltI3HNcTadEHvgbkAQY5XRHeClSZct3fgxPNUTAXm8cMbhDCrfkw14J tjNg== X-Gm-Message-State: ACgBeo1vTyqhrOnAi4LyDIF/3dOg+97fVNBVdP4uFRVNMKoA457qZfFM gAdA1bPYTuzRcrMur4cbLNb7TBxqx8s= X-Google-Smtp-Source: AA6agR6x6nEO1XVz4OaT6zzmKtH6rMVmORnxVC6juWgptKO819OHmuh5hVq59mKPacvgLCher7UA2Q== X-Received: by 2002:a17:902:7208:b0:172:a9d6:527 with SMTP id ba8-20020a170902720800b00172a9d60527mr10903537plb.32.1660982605625; Sat, 20 Aug 2022 01:03:25 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [192.168.43.80] (subs02-180-214-232-78.three.co.id. [180.214.232.78]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id b6-20020a170903228600b0016dc8932725sm4387488plh.285.2022.08.20.01.03.22 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Sat, 20 Aug 2022 01:03:25 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <86a26310-eae0-35e8-ede9-e71825db1416@gmail.com> Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2022 15:03:13 +0700 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.12.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] docs: admin-guide/mm: Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation Content-Language: en-US To: alexlzhu@fb.com, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, Kernel-team@fb.com References: <20220820000024.2494003-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> From: Bagas Sanjaya In-Reply-To: <20220820000024.2494003-1-alexlzhu@fb.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Precedence: bulk List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org On 8/20/22 07:00, alexlzhu@fb.com wrote: > From: Alexander Zhu > > Improve grammar on MM concepts documentation. > > Signed-off-by: Alexander Zhu > > Changes in v3: > -Correct punctuation based on previous comment > > Changes in v2: > -Correct the subject > -Adjust the description The changelog should be below the dashes. Otherwise LGTM. Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya -- An old man doll... just what I always wanted! - Clara