From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: (majordomo@vger.kernel.org) by vger.kernel.org via listexpand id S933639AbaEFB0X (ORCPT ); Mon, 5 May 2014 21:26:23 -0400 Received: from ozlabs.org ([103.22.144.67]:54058 "EHLO ozlabs.org" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S933432AbaEFB0U (ORCPT ); Mon, 5 May 2014 21:26:20 -0400 From: Rusty Russell To: Randy Dunlap Cc: Andrew Morton , Linus Torvalds , Mateusz Guzik , Greg Kroah-Hartman , Steven Rostedt , LKML , Thomas Gleixner , "H. Peter Anvin" , Borislav Petkov , Ingo Molnar , Mel Gorman , Kay Sievers Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH] cmdline: Hide "debug" from /proc/cmdline In-Reply-To: <53678ED6.4070502@infradead.org> References: <20140402144219.4cafbe37@gandalf.local.home> <20140402221212.GD16570@mguzik.redhat.com> <87wqf1oi22.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> <20140502153409.329d3b5b426275e8197251a2@linux-foundation.org> <871tw9c6kt.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> <53678ED6.4070502@infradead.org> User-Agent: Notmuch/0.17 (http://notmuchmail.org) Emacs/24.3.1 (x86_64-pc-linux-gnu) Date: Tue, 06 May 2014 10:27:43 +0930 Message-ID: <87eh07bu60.fsf@rustcorp.com.au> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Sender: linux-kernel-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Randy Dunlap writes: > All looks good to me except for 2 instances of "eg" which should be > "e.g." (just above and about 4 paragraphs below here). Thanks, fixed: diff --git a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt index 56a4c2d0c741..a42b9dd6b46b 100644 --- a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt +++ b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ environment, others are passed as command line arguments to init. Everything after "--" is passed as an argument to init. Module parameters can be specified in two ways: via the kernel command -line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, eg: +line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, e.g.: (kernel command line) usbcore.blinkenlights=1 (modprobe command line) modprobe usbcore blinkenlights=1 @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Hyphens (dashes) and underscores are equivalent in parameter names, so can also be entered as log-buf-len=1M print_fatal_signals=1 -Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, eg: +Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, e.g.: param="spaces in here" This document may not be entirely up to date and comprehensive. The command