From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from ms.lwn.net (ms.lwn.net [45.79.88.28]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D664D188010; Fri, 18 Oct 2024 23:10:45 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1729293047; cv=none; b=hNs8BSq3/qJA3Aqc6mI0n/p0K20ZYVMCDvPH7SclbxgHRs4QgK0ZrI0SCmVPuL/1Lbmx5zv20Lfi5mGmz/aRJfnm7dU/+nNETVT/miKIdBJjLAtwiD2FBQmsqHN7hQyBXxarnmaY8T/Lz5sD1+P0KS+V7fANfOQpmlRoS/HrwEU= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1729293047; c=relaxed/simple; bh=otoe+BGRbyuDn/lOepWOrtR+flmjPhfhb96L2mqFw0g=; h=From:To:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:Message-ID: MIME-Version:Content-Type; b=m55G6s6BNwO8emyMhpgvgoFrLTSdI2pq0FTjH1WzYL2SP0CoyoTrjGg+t2DukQgShGUzW0PLtM0kB9DrpuImeK5GVS5hfCUZR+HFB8WxOL2BjuTicy6Z37CdCmS5CFjFxhpPxszlSSD0rxJe6bwILdhVnlFeQ4t/pej8twdLclk= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b=X5G5eSAp; arc=none smtp.client-ip=45.79.88.28 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=none dis=none) header.from=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=lwn.net Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=lwn.net header.i=@lwn.net header.b="X5G5eSAp" DKIM-Filter: OpenDKIM Filter v2.11.0 ms.lwn.net 1807A42C06 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=lwn.net; s=20201203; t=1729293039; bh=5AWQDmmLs2C5s9TCiUZ+fDHV3xfKrluqYeFPnJ++8vA=; h=From:To:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=X5G5eSAp6EeGcJqehcoRZE3PL3L31iaFSgUYiXvVsetIXEoFpcVvmmPcaKh1RrxIP fkol8pSTy/cQla19vSx1qzAfuHQzaqHcJSePvtD2PSkkZyplzZUvCC3nR3QVrQ0f/E j7ssQyjwjApqE/Q0brJ0eLcLdpn0o+VBMdhC7K0XrlNFqrUu+zgFQUYdNAuid4OHc4 hCezvs7qFgeuTIlBr4vmEHFDl8ruyu6mz8UQS1hNOE3FM+4Z5wckowQ7U6u7NmZDOE SZlTooQLmvdX5icTCCEsrfIILEVKnBH2XpXjJhyo/3BC5OD8JF7ovasLk324IOd11d BqNX1PVvANyOw== Received: from localhost (unknown [IPv6:2601:280:5e00:625:67c:16ff:fe81:5f9b]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ms.lwn.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 1807A42C06; Fri, 18 Oct 2024 23:10:39 +0000 (UTC) From: Jonathan Corbet To: Nir Lichtman , jason.wessel@windriver.com, daniel.thompson@linaro.org, dianders@chromium.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Documentation: English fixes in kgdb/kdb article In-Reply-To: <20241018223536.GA799515@lichtman.org> References: <20241018163136.GA795979@lichtman.org> <20241018175540.GA796909@lichtman.org> <20241018223536.GA799515@lichtman.org> Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2024 17:10:38 -0600 Message-ID: <87wmi5vwgh.fsf@trenco.lwn.net> Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain A couple of comments.. Nir Lichtman writes: > Minor grammar and typos fixed in the kgdb/kdb article > > Signed-off-by: Nir Lichtman > --- When you post followup versions to a patch, please put an explanation in this space saying what has changed; that makes life easier for reviewers. > Documentation/dev-tools/kgdb.rst | 16 +++++++--------- > 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) Beyond that, it is good to wait a little while before posting new versions to let other reviews come through. Three iterations in one day are a bit much. That said, the patch looks OK now; I'll apply it shortly. Thanks, jon