From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from imap5.colo.codethink.co.uk (imap5.colo.codethink.co.uk [78.40.148.171]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by smtp.subspace.kernel.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D26A6539C for ; Mon, 13 May 2024 15:19:36 +0000 (UTC) Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; arc=none smtp.client-ip=78.40.148.171 ARC-Seal:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1715613579; cv=none; b=r/qCuzZNa8+V9eFM4R/37DFZwLTN6rUQ+18n/iZ1v++6lKYKh9uC8bst+Yq+gP1xY+OP40McP4PQZmKWm505Vc0URhDMzpIhRMk8CxbBJHeWpVfC3ergFOX3pObiCgE79iMb2gWPDqPjqrOTG0xsq97Q/bLsSSAO/iCCmbYAO5g= ARC-Message-Signature:i=1; a=rsa-sha256; d=subspace.kernel.org; s=arc-20240116; t=1715613579; c=relaxed/simple; bh=sPuS7EPTrz0qRzjB2FtezfNzBYa0BrXVt3jdkcELRN8=; h=MIME-Version:Date:From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References: Message-ID:Content-Type; b=tZHSGwR/pSwpWJAwAqW4uGVxJanRk29nOCSAzGsokdtJuDcVEfoXrrE8UNpZablV6rWaEIEzLCsN5+prkWqUFLLGY6JuRpOSGrF2R+twL2my6jN0jFbVOq5/MQGVzHRDt2kXdQNuI5tXJiuNaxtM+X6khxEo6vzcMvs45skTq5Y= ARC-Authentication-Results:i=1; smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=codethink.co.uk; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=codethink.co.uk; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=codethink.co.uk header.i=@codethink.co.uk header.b=PTw3Qwi3; arc=none smtp.client-ip=78.40.148.171 Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dmarc=pass (p=reject dis=none) header.from=codethink.co.uk Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=codethink.co.uk Authentication-Results: smtp.subspace.kernel.org; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=codethink.co.uk header.i=@codethink.co.uk header.b="PTw3Qwi3" DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=codethink.co.uk; s=imap5-20230908; h=Sender:Content-Transfer-Encoding: Content-Type:Message-ID:References:In-Reply-To:Subject:Cc:To:From:Date: MIME-Version:Reply-To:Content-ID:Content-Description:Resent-Date:Resent-From: Resent-Sender:Resent-To:Resent-Cc:Resent-Message-ID:List-Id:List-Help: List-Unsubscribe:List-Subscribe:List-Post:List-Owner:List-Archive; bh=o87U42jqnR9nQVj48Q2/0KYOkznU0Vujp/drf/oUq20=; b=PTw3Qwi3fgASGoRP0cbQORF/Gb T+/gXNBNuBH0hYGO3KV8S6vEbz7zRFpegBkeQzhYumffofHtab/+/1I0YkKtTFZx4zQTPvwxgBFWh b7lgxy3vyOsin/kU+0oR2/iVx6mG1b+rrDBX23oKz4elacSX26y3vP1Le2PMsjXzm1BaP+X/pxExM SkaDaqFWcoKHrGvjpdVSStnmK/xeG52xVYC43WH4TzDMLZ5lO/7Pq0WzukcgdXe1HY+fC90ZaGuqq eZx/7g8toEujg8lJjHUZjSY+6VdywtO8QA4g973UxYlVu+LGC+tkBMSBD4qKQp07Y0jczwlnKAcVf D53yrMGA==; Received: from [78.40.148.178] (helo=webmail.codethink.co.uk) by imap5.colo.codethink.co.uk with esmtpsa (Exim 4.94.2 #2 (Debian)) id 1s6XSI-002nuN-1p; Mon, 13 May 2024 16:19:10 +0100 Precedence: bulk X-Mailing-List: linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: MIME-Version: 1.0 Date: Mon, 13 May 2024 16:19:10 +0100 From: Paul Sherwood To: Phil Auld Cc: mingo@redhat.com, peterz@infradead.org, juri.lelli@redhat.com, vincent.guittot@linaro.org, dietmar.eggemann@arm.com, rostedt@goodmis.org, bsegall@google.com, mgorman@suse.de, bristot@redhat.com, vschneid@redhat.com, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] sched/deadline: Fix grammar and typos in comments In-Reply-To: <20240513135812.GA9998@lorien.usersys.redhat.com> References: <20240511082644.44757-1-paul.sherwood@codethink.co.uk> <20240513135812.GA9998@lorien.usersys.redhat.com> Message-ID: X-Sender: paul.sherwood@codethink.co.uk Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: paul.sherwood@codethink.co.uk On 2024-05-13 14:58, Phil Auld wrote: > On Sat, May 11, 2024 at 09:26:44AM +0100 Paul Sherwood wrote: >> - conjugate verb to match subject of sentence >> - s/a entity/an entity/g >> - s/this misbehave/this misbehaviour/ >> - a few typos >> > - not starting all the lines of a commit message with "-", priceless. > > Plus, you're just repeating what's in the actual patch. > > Otherwise, these changes themselves look good to me. Thanks for the feedback - would you like me to re-submit without the bullet-points, or without the text entirely? br Paul