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On Tue, 21 Mar 2023 10:05:22 -0700 Stephen Hemminger wrote:
> Looks good overall. I used a grammar scanner to look for issues and
> it found lots of little things.

Thanks for that, I folded in all the grammar improvements.
I did not take the larger changes, they lose context / relations,
I prefer the current wording.