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From: Simon Horman <horms@kernel.org>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Cc: Linux Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
	Linux Documentation <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>,
	Linux Networking <netdev@vger.kernel.org>,
	"David S. Miller" <davem@davemloft.net>,
	Eric Dumazet <edumazet@google.com>,
	Jakub Kicinski <kuba@kernel.org>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@redhat.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
	Mauro Carvalho Chehab <mchehab+huawei@kernel.org>,
	Kees Cook <kees@kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net-next 2/3] net: dns_resolver: Move dns_query() explanation out of code block
Date: Tue, 23 Sep 2025 11:14:56 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20250923101456.GI836419@horms.kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20250922095647.38390-4-bagasdotme@gmail.com>

On Mon, Sep 22, 2025 at 04:56:47PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> Documentation for dns_query() is placed in the function's literal code
> block snippet instead. Move it out of there.
> 
> Fixes: 9dfe1361261b ("docs: networking: convert dns_resolver.txt to ReST")
> Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>

Thanks, this renders much better. In a browser at least.

I've added a few comments below.

> ---
>  Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst | 45 +++++++++++------------
>  1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst b/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> index 5cec37bedf9950..329fb21d005ccd 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> @@ -64,44 +64,43 @@ before the more general line given above as the first match is the one taken::
>  Usage
>  =====
>  
> -To make use of this facility, one of the following functions that are
> -implemented in the module can be called after doing::
> +To make use of this facility, the appropriate header must be included first::

Maybe: ..., first linux/dns_resolver.h must be included.

>  
>  	#include <linux/dns_resolver.h>
>  
> -     ::
> +Then you can make queries by calling::

Please use imperative mood:

Then queries may be made by calling::

>  
>  	int dns_query(const char *type, const char *name, size_t namelen,
>  		     const char *options, char **_result, time_t *_expiry);
>  
> -     This is the basic access function.  It looks for a cached DNS query and if
> -     it doesn't find it, it upcalls to userspace to make a new DNS query, which
> -     may then be cached.  The key description is constructed as a string of the
> -     form::
> +This is the basic access function.  It looks for a cached DNS query and if
> +it doesn't find it, it upcalls to userspace to make a new DNS query, which
> +may then be cached.  The key description is constructed as a string of the
> +form::
>  
>  		[<type>:]<name>
>  
> -     where <type> optionally specifies the particular upcall program to invoke,
> -     and thus the type of query to do, and <name> specifies the string to be
> -     looked up.  The default query type is a straight hostname to IP address
> -     set lookup.
> +where <type> optionally specifies the particular upcall program to invoke,
> +and thus the type of query to do, and <name> specifies the string to be

I think while we are here "to do" could be removed.
But maybe that's just me.

> +looked up.  The default query type is a straight hostname to IP address
> +set lookup.

...

  reply	other threads:[~2025-09-23 10:15 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 10+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2025-09-22  9:56 [PATCH net-next 0/3] dns_resolver docs formatting cleanup Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-22  9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 1/3] net: dns_resolver: Use reST bullet list for features list Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:07   ` Simon Horman
2025-09-22  9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 2/3] net: dns_resolver: Move dns_query() explanation out of code block Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:14   ` Simon Horman [this message]
2025-09-24  0:44     ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-24  5:00     ` Randy Dunlap
2025-09-25  9:08       ` Simon Horman
2025-09-22  9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 3/3] net: dns_resolver: Fix request-key cross-reference Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:23   ` Simon Horman

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