From: Simon Horman <horms@kernel.org>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Cc: Linux Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
Linux Documentation <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>,
Linux Networking <netdev@vger.kernel.org>,
"David S. Miller" <davem@davemloft.net>,
Eric Dumazet <edumazet@google.com>,
Jakub Kicinski <kuba@kernel.org>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@redhat.com>,
Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>,
Mauro Carvalho Chehab <mchehab+huawei@kernel.org>,
Kees Cook <kees@kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net-next 2/3] net: dns_resolver: Move dns_query() explanation out of code block
Date: Tue, 23 Sep 2025 11:14:56 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20250923101456.GI836419@horms.kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20250922095647.38390-4-bagasdotme@gmail.com>
On Mon, Sep 22, 2025 at 04:56:47PM +0700, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> Documentation for dns_query() is placed in the function's literal code
> block snippet instead. Move it out of there.
>
> Fixes: 9dfe1361261b ("docs: networking: convert dns_resolver.txt to ReST")
> Signed-off-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
Thanks, this renders much better. In a browser at least.
I've added a few comments below.
> ---
> Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst | 45 +++++++++++------------
> 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst b/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> index 5cec37bedf9950..329fb21d005ccd 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/dns_resolver.rst
> @@ -64,44 +64,43 @@ before the more general line given above as the first match is the one taken::
> Usage
> =====
>
> -To make use of this facility, one of the following functions that are
> -implemented in the module can be called after doing::
> +To make use of this facility, the appropriate header must be included first::
Maybe: ..., first linux/dns_resolver.h must be included.
>
> #include <linux/dns_resolver.h>
>
> - ::
> +Then you can make queries by calling::
Please use imperative mood:
Then queries may be made by calling::
>
> int dns_query(const char *type, const char *name, size_t namelen,
> const char *options, char **_result, time_t *_expiry);
>
> - This is the basic access function. It looks for a cached DNS query and if
> - it doesn't find it, it upcalls to userspace to make a new DNS query, which
> - may then be cached. The key description is constructed as a string of the
> - form::
> +This is the basic access function. It looks for a cached DNS query and if
> +it doesn't find it, it upcalls to userspace to make a new DNS query, which
> +may then be cached. The key description is constructed as a string of the
> +form::
>
> [<type>:]<name>
>
> - where <type> optionally specifies the particular upcall program to invoke,
> - and thus the type of query to do, and <name> specifies the string to be
> - looked up. The default query type is a straight hostname to IP address
> - set lookup.
> +where <type> optionally specifies the particular upcall program to invoke,
> +and thus the type of query to do, and <name> specifies the string to be
I think while we are here "to do" could be removed.
But maybe that's just me.
> +looked up. The default query type is a straight hostname to IP address
> +set lookup.
...
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2025-09-23 10:15 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 10+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2025-09-22 9:56 [PATCH net-next 0/3] dns_resolver docs formatting cleanup Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-22 9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 1/3] net: dns_resolver: Use reST bullet list for features list Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:07 ` Simon Horman
2025-09-22 9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 2/3] net: dns_resolver: Move dns_query() explanation out of code block Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:14 ` Simon Horman [this message]
2025-09-24 0:44 ` Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-24 5:00 ` Randy Dunlap
2025-09-25 9:08 ` Simon Horman
2025-09-22 9:56 ` [PATCH net-next 3/3] net: dns_resolver: Fix request-key cross-reference Bagas Sanjaya
2025-09-23 10:23 ` Simon Horman
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